they died! wow...thats heavy. good chapter

OMG its getting closer to the end

After Reading Chapter 83, the Monster Pet Fluffy stated her Review:

Fluffy: "HAHAHAHA! That was excellent...I'm glad to see Sora and Kairi falling into Maleficent's trap...The Royal Trio finally got what was coming to them...oh...and Riku was such a fool to work alone...he was a fool to abandon his frineds like that...in any event, Pluto-Zero, you are going to be executed and...what the...? Oh I see...King Mickey 007, Queen Minnie 001 and the other Rebels are here...oh dear...GASP..."

Storm Trooper: "Fluffy, Pizza-Hut just used The Force and smashed the main doors open...We have got to stop them..."

Fluffy: "Oh...honestly...I already know that...I'll just do what Maleficent did...It's time to show these @$%&# who's boss..."

The Monster Pet, Fluffy, summons a black hole and the Rebels get sucked into it...I, King Mickey 007, and Queen Minnie 001 were terrified...we clung onto a pipe for dear life...the black hole disappears...we fall to the ground...The Monster Pet Fluffy...walks up to us...and she glares at us...

Fluffy: "How dare you interfere with my fun...You're both going to be executed as well...I can't believe you both have the nerve to mess with my plans...hm...you both go together...I HATE YAOI! So NO homosexual stuff...I hate Homosexuals!"

King Mickey 007: "Is that why you HATE Riku...? Is that why you HATE Pluto-Zero...? Is that why you...Is that why you HATE YAOI!"

The Monster-Pet Fluffy screams in anger, and her eyes glare at me...

Fluffy: "I HATE YAOI! I HATE THEM ALL! THEY SHOULD ALL $%$%$&%& $#%&! THEY HAVE NO RIGHT TO LIVE! AH! (knocks me out unconscious...I fall to the ground...) FURTHERMORE...I BELIEVE THAT RIKU AND PLUTO-ZERO ARE BOTH STRAIGHT! STRAIGHT LIKE ARROWS...PLUTO-ZERO COULDN'T STOP TALKING ABOUT YOU QUEEN MINNIE 001, AND RIKU COULDN'T STOP THINKING ABOUT KAIRI! WHERE THE $%$&* #@% DO YOU IDIOTS GET SUCH STUPID IDEAS!"

Queen Minnie 001: "007! NO! Why? Why did you capture Pluto-Zero then...he's NOT gay! FLUFFY! YOU ARE A #$%$%%&&*@!#$!@$#$&*&*&**%&% PSYCHOPATH! YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT! YOU'RE INSANE!"

Fluffy: "YAHO! HAWOWOOHUUIYA! Riku is STRAIGHT! AND I WILL SHOW YOU! PLUTO-ZERO IS GAY! HE IS STRAIGHT! RIKU IS STRAIGHT! WHAT DIFFERENCE DOES IT MAKE! I AM THE GODDESS OF THE NEW WORLD! I WILL KILL ANYONE THAT IS EVIL! I AM KIRA! I AM THE ONE AND ONLY ONE...I AM THE CHOSEN ONE...I AM THE DAUGHTER OF JENOVA! I AM THE GODDESS OF THE UNIVERSE! HOOHAHOOHAHOOHAHOOHAHOOHA! THE QUICK BROWN FOX JUMPS OVER THE LAZY DOG!"

Queen Minnie 001: "Oh my gosh...we're gonna die...(gulps)...oh $#&...007...please get up...please...(starts to cry)...oh come on...Sora and Kairi have it worse off you know...oh no...#$%*%@ you Fluffy! You are completely psychopathic...you have no right to live Fluffy!"

Fluffy: "AHWO! DIE! (punches Queen Minnie 001 in the head, Queen Minnie 001 falls down to the ground as well...) THERE! I AM BETTER THAN YOU! I AM BETTER THAN ALL OF YOU!"

After Reading Chapter 82 I, King Mickey 007, stated my review:

King Mickey 007: "I can't believe it...Sora and Kairi are going to go up against Maleficent...wow...I'm shocked...wow..."

Queen Minnie 001: "I know...jeez...and Riku got captured by Maleficent...good-grief...well that's just great...oh before I forget...once all of this is over...will go on a date with me 007?"

King Mickey 007: "I...uh...oh...uh...sure...(gulp)...but uh...your a keyblade master...you're taller than I am...you're a lot stronger than I am and I...uh...am weaker..."

Mr. Trucker: "Hey! Listen up! I'm really getting sick and tired of the Monster Pet Fluffy! Also, the Rebel Forces agreed to launch a full scale attack on the Imperial Fleet! It's time to end this madness once and for all! The Imperial Fleet must fall! Boy...it's going to start right here...right now! This is because...(sigh)...how do I say this 007? Well...your best-friend...you know...your dog-robot: Pluto-Zero...well...he..."

White-Heart: "...HAS BEEN CAPTURED BY THAT #$%#@% MONSTER PET FLUFFY! FURTHERMORE...SHE'S GOING TO EXECUTE HIM BECAUSE HE'S A REBEL...AND ALSO...HE LIKES...WELL...STUFF..."

Mr. Trucker: "What kind of stuff? (White-Heart whispers in Mr. Trucker's ear.) OH! UH? OKAY...THAT IS VERY DISTURBING...WAIT A MINUTE...aren't you a..."

White-Heart: *GASPS* "WHAT? NO! SHUT UP! I AM NOT A...! (BLUSHES RED) I...UH...OH $#%&..."

King Mickey 007: "Woah...wait a minute..."

White-Heart: "NO! SHUT IT! ALL OF YOU! WE HAVE AN EPIC BATTLE COMING OUR WAY! SO GET READY FOR BATTLE EVERYONE!"

White-Heart (The Goddess of Love and Kindness) storms off and heads to the command center of the ship.

Mr. Trucker: "King Mickey 007, Queen Minnie 001, my wife, White-Heart, is well...how do I put this...she may be an Admiral of the Rebel Forces and she may be the Goddess of Love and Kindness...but...she...well...she's a fan-girl..."

Queen Minnie 001: "What do you mean...?"

Mr. Trucker: "Nevermind...forget what I said...let's just say that she knows who Pluto-Zero loves with a dying passion...who he, Pluto-Zero, wants to jump on...if I may say so politely...well come on...it's time for battle!"

AWESOME! UPDATE SOON!

This is really an awesome story! I'm still early on, but i'm really enroached in the storytelling mechanics you have used so far! Hey, um, just wondering...will you be doing a nightmare before christmas part? That's my favorite Tim Burton film, and all time favorite film and i'm sure you would make an excellent chapter on it.

Huh, so we're coming up to the final battle are we? This'll be good. Sora and Kairi are going to go on a date (fin-a-lly!) when they get home, and Maleficent's going to get her butt whooped by the White Materia and Holy.

Can't wait.

May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

Shire Folk

i read this story orginally on another site and it seems to be diffrent I am assuming that you changed it.

I just have to say that you got the reason the sky is blue mixed up. The water is blue because it reflects the sky.

After Reading Chapter 81, Sea-Key stated her review...

Sea-Key *sobbing*: "That was so sweet...I know exactly how Tifa and Kairi are feeling...(crying)...Look at me...a powerful Keyblade Wielding Crawfish and I'm crying like a big baby...(sobs)...my husband, Pizza-Hut is just like Cloud...Fearless...strong and powerful...and look at me...I'm all weak and powerless...Gosh I'm such a wimp..."

Sea-Key was right next to the giant lobster, Pizza-Hut...Pizza-Hut, the greatest Jedi-Knight out there, was slowly recovering...Sea-Key was just in tears...she was crying like crazy...her emotions and care for her husband was right here...she loved her husband so much...Queen Minnie 001 on the other hand did NOT cry at all...she just stared in horror...I, King Mickey 007, was dying away...my conditions were getting worse...I was severely poisoned...001 went and tried to find someone that could heal my wounds...but it was no use...then White-Heart came in the room and told Queen Minnie 001 to help the other injured Rebels...

White-Heart *sobbing*: "My poor baby...hang in there...please! You've got to hang in there...I can't believe this...Jabba the Hutt must have poisoned you and I didn't even realize it...I'm so sorry...I'm so sorry for everything...I want to adopt you...I want to be your mother...I always wanted to have a family...since my husband, Mr. Trucker is a Nobody...I could NEVER have children...I finally have a chance to have a family...(crying)..I want you to be my son...I love you King Mickey 007...I'll be your new mother...I love you...it will be you...me...and Mr. Trucker...Mr. Trucker always wanted to be a father...his Nobody title is 'The Father of Infinity' after all...you will be his son...it's going to work out...I promise...I know you can't hear me right now because you're out like a light...but yeah...(crying)...I'm so sorry for everything...Mr. Trucker's Somebody, Road-Kill, murdered your whole family alive! What Road-Kill did is absolutely unforgivable! The Gods and Goddesses will accept you I promise...They will...I know my father will be angry with me but I don't care...blood-lines...what-ever...I don't care about that stuff...I care about you and I care about my husband!...Queen Minnie 001 LOVES you very much too! She has been by your side since the day you were taken into this hospital room...She said that she loved you in the bottom of her heart...she wants to be with you forever and ever...you know...even Pluto-Zero said that...you know...I wouldn't be surprised if Riku's crying right now...poor Sora...huh...you're healing up...(White-Heart embraces me)...it's working...your healing...oh thank goodness...it's a miracle...you're no longer poisoned...oh thank goodness..."

Queen Minnie 001: "Hey...how is King Mickey 007 doing? (She starts to cry in happiness...) You did it...White-Heart...omg...you saved him...omg...White-Heart thank you for healing him...he's breathing normal again...omg...he's recovering...White-Heart...I love you so much...you saved his life! Thank you! Thank you!" :'))

Another GREAT chapter but it took awhile

great begining!

COOL! UPDATE SOON!

Heh, the girls had a little heart to heart. Why do I always enjoy reading stuff like this?

81 chapters... Whoa... I don't know if I could ever do that. And hopefully you're still going strong. I'll be reading, honest.

That's all I can say for now. So until next time, ciao!

ohh I remember finding a video on youtube that had this fight in it, minus Sora of course lol. I also remember that song, it's kick ass even if it is about a villian :P