Reviews for Random Destiny

Reviews For: Random Destiny - Reviews: Page 1 of 9

Shlandria 2008-05-30 ch 8,	abuseWow, this is a really great story!
Bobboky 2007-12-05 ch 8,	abusecool
Sdarian 2007-09-24 ch 8,	abuseThis is good! Keep it up!
DarkShinji8003 2007-08-15 ch 8,	abuseLookin forward to Future chapters Update real soon
BlackRoseFire 2007-07-30 ch 8,	abuseAWESOME story please continue it.
Bob Lobster 2007-07-11 ch 8,	abuseUmm, I'm gonna go with Weebee on this one. I liked your story until the whole training trip arc kicked in. You took some of the most powerful techniques in the series and taught them to the least powerful character in less time than it took Ranma to learn even one of them. I've seen God-like character stories before but...okay this isn't really any worse than any other God-like character story, but they all tend to ** me off, so that's neither here nor there. So, next week, can we assume that Akane will be learning to teleport, fly and raise the dead? Or perhaps Ranma, being the God of Martial Arts that he is, will teach her how to blow up mountains and invert her Chi, creating black holes that can suck in entire cities. After all, we all know that he can destroy entire continents by looking at them funny and lift dump trucks over his head with his pinky finger. I think my sarcasm unit actually burned itself out there... Now, I want it understood that I'm not trying to discourage you from writing, because I can see talent there, and as I said, I did enjoy the story. Please though, for the love of the English language, show a little restraint when writing characters. A little realism goes a long way to making a story more enjoyable. Oh, and while I'm making seemingly unreasonable demands, can we not bash characters too badly. Ranma is filled with characters that have both good sides and bad sides. If all you focus on is their bad qualities, than you do both the character and the writer a great disservice. I'm trying not to make this a flame, despite the high levels of ire throughout, so please take it as constructive criticism as it was intended.
shinji the good sharer 2007-04-28 ch 8,	abuse...why didn't you have her kill the useless pig? ikari shinji
Wonderbee31 2007-04-27 ch 8,	abuseGreat battle here, though wonder if this is going to finally get through Ryoga's thick head, or will he do a Kuno and convince himself that it's all Ranma's fault anyway.
Dragon Man 180 2007-04-27 ch 8,	abuseNice beat down of the pig. I can't wait to see how the return to Nerima goes
Alex Ultra 2007-04-20 ch 8,	abuseI like your story. I think that the girls improved too much too quickly to be real, though to be fair Nuku Nuku DOES have years of combat experience, where Akane has a whole childhood of Martial Arts training behind her; to be honest I really expected at least a better fight from Ryoga. Not necessarily a power play, but I only actually remember Akane getting hit once, and with the desperity in skill between the two of them I would have expected things to be a bit closer, especially after only a week of training. The story's good and I honestly can't wait for Mishima H.I. to get into the mix; I wonder how Madame Anger Management (or lack thereof) will take to finding out that Nuku Nuku is now flesh and blood? :D I'd love so see that one. ^^ Alex Ultra: Heavy Lines Of Ki LATER
weebee 2007-04-18 ch 8,	abuseungh... this is... rather disgusting. In that fight against Ryoga, Akane WAS Ranma. She was over powered for herself, and no offence, but NO ONE learns the Bakusai Tenketsu, Kachuu tenshin Amaguriken and Yamasenken school in a WEEK! Ranma took a week, after Herb, to learn the BASICS of the Umi-Senken. He took a week to learn the Amaguriken, and Ryoga took a week to learn the Bakusai Tenketsu. Ranma took THREE WEEKS to learn the Moko Takabisha! If Akane's learning curve was this good, she would have, unequivically, handed Ranma his on their first day, and you KNOW it. Seriously, find some other, more beleavable plot device to allow Akane to win against the pig boy because this makes me twitch. Also, you mentioned Ranma being MORE POWERFUL than this? God, Cologne should be scared out of her mind then because AKANE could destroy her right now! The only reason Ranma can't is because he has a limit as to how fast he can perform his moves, EG: No Moko Takabisha directly after Amagurikens, and that he has no access to the forbidden schools. THEY ARE FORBIDDEN, DUMB ! Sorry... but seriously, you're over powering Akane drastically, I'm not gunna comment on Nuku Nuku 'cuz I don't know her series, and you could be overpowering Ranma as well but I don't know because he's barely lifted a finger in a fight this whole damned fic... Okay, this if a flame, pure and simple. I'm sorry about it, I truely am, but this chapter made me seriously lose my temper. I request that you fix it.
deathgeonous 2007-04-18 ch 8,	abuseGoody Goody Gum Drops, It's Back! (Did I acctually type that? Looks back, Yes, yes I did.) I was wondering where this went. Well It's back, and going on my favorites list now, YAY! And you hate Ryoga, don't you? Not that I mind, but a lot of people hate him. Either that, or reform him. He's a guy you either hate or pitty, and I take it you hate him.
ranger5 2007-04-17 ch 1,	abuseNice story you've got here. Ourstanding character interactions.
Tama Saga 2007-04-17 ch 8,	abuseSeeing how everyone said good things about the story, I'll skip directly to why your story ** me off. -.- I can't help but feel that this isn't Nuku Nuku. You've got the Ranma part down with all the training and fighting, but for the Nuku Nuku part, there's a distinct lack of giant mecha, heavy weaponry, or Nuku Nuku's silly but fun antics. I remember reading a trading card for Nuku Nuku, "purehearted." It's very difficult to anger her. Ryuunosuke or Kyuusaku have to be in danger before she gets serious. When it's her own life however, she'll either think you're playing with her, or she'll run away in fear. She's not directly confrontational like she is in Chapter 2. You don't have a lot of Ryuunosuke or Kyuusaku interaction with Nuku Nuku. That's a critical piece of the the story that you're throwing right out. In addition, I think that after becoming a girl, Nuku Nuku would be a bit on the lazy side. One reason why she attended school in the TV series is to blend in with her classmates. You don't see her study nor do you see her train...they're natural abilities that she has already. No need to work on it if you can already do it. So why should it be any different right now? Of course there's a difference! She can even feel it. But I'm pretty certain she won't want to train. She'd rather just lie in a sunbeam and nap. As for training...Giving Nuku Nuku access to Chi and Ki attacks are not her. She's a specialist in physical combat. If it requires brute force, she'll be good at it. Okay, you can give her access to the Neko-ken. That's somewhat acceptable. But giving her access to the Bakusai Tenketsu? Neither Akane or Nuku Nuku have the required meditative skill to achieve a state where they can see the breaking points. For that matter, neither of them can use the chestnut fist because they're not fast enough. Che. By trying to equalize the playing field, you're ignoring rules and messing up characters. And what do you get in the end? Something generic that you're packaging under the heading Ranma x Nuku Nuku crossover. What's so special about it if the people that shouldn't be learning advanced martial arts techniques are learning them at speeds hundreds of times faster than the prodigy of martial arts? Gaah, I can't stand this story! It screws up both universes.
gen x 2007-04-17 ch 7, anon.	abuseNice how you merged these two different anime in a crossover, dude.

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