GO FOR A F-KING SEQUEL!

Gotta love this one..

Brit Brit suggested I read this. It is a well written story that I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing it.

ok, uh, you said "“What’s that for?” Marissa yelled over the incredible noise filling the lab as RJ rounded the corner, skittering on the floor again in the process." Shouldn't it be Rob, not RJ?

Great chapter!

LOVE IT! I really like the friendship between Hammy and RJ. I almost cried when the part where Hammy was momentarily dead came. I had to fight tears! I REALLY like this story! Faves!

Aw-w-w-w-w. Neat ending. This seemed to have a more serious tone than the movie, and it doesn't have as many snappy one-liners, but it works very well for the direction you were going in. It’s a story that still smoothly follows the Dreamworks piece, and I certainly appreciate the maturing experience for the characters. I’ll be moving on to read the sequel very soon.

This chapter was crazy, over-the-top cartoony, and largely degrading to Humans.

Compliment intended, of course. I, for one, had a lot of fun!

Excellent chapter, and an excellent story so far. Well-thought-out action sequences with thrilling details, the original characters' mannerisms and dialog are spot on, and your own characters are smart and interesting. But the graphic descriptions of painful restraint, animal cruelty, and torture just ... satisfy me.

M ...

But seriously, I was a little thrown off by the occasional use of profanity. Light though it may be, it seems somewhat out of place here. It's not a big problem, and some of the dialog certainly needs powerful words, but if it could gradually be phased out and replaced with deeply emotional phrases that are clean, that would be best in my opinion.

Great story! Kept me at the edge of my seat!

YESS!

OMFG write A sequel? No. Write a series, dude! You are good at this!

You're writing a sequel? JOY!*hugs*You're the greatest!*bouncing off walls with happiness*

HI

This was a geart start. I am looking forward to reading the other chapters.

mimi

One word. SEQUEL!

w00t!
Oh man, that was, like, and... yoyu know with the crying cause of the hammy and the cookies and thwe laughter?
Ya know?
Um, let me rephrase that.
(glomp) I LOVE YOU!

of course there should be a sequel. as long as theres no rj/hammy im happy.

i loved this story it would fit perfectly for a sequel to the real movie. hehehehehe.

Love it! Loveitloveitloveit! I can't tell ye how much I loved your story! I was a little bit hessitant when I saw the title and description of the story but when I read the first chapter, the first paragraph... what can I say? I love the way you write and how you manage to keep everyone totally in character. I also like that bond Hammy and RJ have that you put, they're like really good friends, each worried about the other throughout the story, each... bleh I could blab on all day, to sum it all up...

Your story RULES!