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| acepro Evolution 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abusebrilliant, brilliant... BRILLIANT! |
| 113crc 2007-10-26 ch 25, | abusegood story but i've read better. |
| dlsky 2007-10-05 ch 25, | abuseThis was a wonderful story, I liked the diffrent lives of Luke and the feelings that you shared in communication without having him speak until the very end. It's a hard thing to do for getting your readers to see, experiance, and comprehend all that is happening, being experianced, and felt with a character that has trouble interacting with others. Again a wonderful AU approach to this storyline, a much better ending; happier, and I look forward to reading you next saga. |
| grayangle 2007-09-02 ch 25, | abuseI read it as soon as I can find it. I hope the Great Muse will bless you and the story flows from your fingers with the greatest of speed and care. |
| Tombadgerlock 2007-06-30 ch 24, | abusehey, this was good :-) i enjoyed this story a lot, even the writing style was entrancing. |
| Tombadgerlock 2007-06-30 ch 9, | abuseincredible story, though i ownder what will happen now that luke is taken. |
| Tombadgerlock 2007-06-30 ch 4, | abuseouch, i dislike full-of-hatred!leia, but we'll see. |
| Tombadgerlock 2007-06-30 ch 2, | abuseexcellent! Very, very intriguing :-) |
| Tombadgerlock 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuse*very* good, though it is kind of reminiscent of walk like men. |
| Kawaii Chibi Shun 2007-06-01 ch 24, | abuseThis story was *amazing*. I honestly don't know where to start in this review. You took one simple "What if?" and completely rewrote the events, while still leaving some things the same despite the differences. It was wonderfully well written, and there were little bits of humor in just the right places to lighten up the plot slightly while still keeping it a serious story. This is going on my favorites list, and, for that matter, I've decided to add you to my favorite authors list also. |
| Alien Roxi 2007-05-22 ch 2, | abuseSo cute so far! I will have to read more tommorow... |
| nightbug08 2007-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'll tell you right now, Wikipedia sucks, great story though! |
| xyvortex 2007-01-22 ch 24, | abuseGreat story but the end seemed a bit rushed |
| Jedi1952 2006-11-24 ch 24, | abuseI was truly rivited to this story from beginning to end. It is one of the best ever, and I include published EU in that appraisal. Definately a 10+. The plus is because I didn't feel the urge to get my "red pen" out to edit spelling and grammar, etc. LOL. THANK YOU so much for sharing your story with us. I would really like to see a sequel. This one really does beg for one. Luke, Mara, Leia, Han, Anakin, and Obi-Wan. Not to mention Bail, Chewie and Yoda. Thank you again! |
| -w- easy enough 2006-10-15 ch 24, | abuseOMG! so great! I absolutley love it! ^^ |