I loved it, loved it, loved it! You portrayed Trixie very well! I'm impressed. I can't wait for more updates. Keep on the good work!

Hey. Can I have a character in the story? Maybe 2. They'll be twins.

Profiles:

Name: Sora Gekido
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Pokemon: Gabite, Misdreavous, Arcanine, Lucario
Hair: Middle back length. It's honey-brown with blonde streaks in it. She usually has her hair down but with two braids tied together at the ends like a crown.
Eyes: Sapphire
Personality: Outgoing, friendly, stubborn
Clothes: Gray jacket over a black halter top. She's also got on dark gray cargos, black sneakers and wears a black velvet choker around her neck.
Other: She's adopted. Her adopted father is Volker. She's also got a twin named Kuma. Her starter Pokemon had been a Riolu that she found abandoned near Sunnyshore City. Her Riolu had evolved into a Lucario and always stays by her side. Sora and her brother had been visiting her cousins and then met up with Melly and Zane. She can have a crush on Zane if it's ok. Her full name means Sky Wrath. She has a slender frame and is an extremely good battler.


Name: Kuma Gekido
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Empoleon, Rampardos, Mismagius, Ponyta
Hair: Shoulder length honey-brown hair with blonde streaks it it.
Eyes: Emerald green
Personality: Friendly, mellow, has a hidden fire
Clothes: Baggy black T-shirt, silver bracelet, black cargos, black sneakers and a gray cap that he puts on backwards.
Other: He, like his twin sister, is adopted. His adopted father is Volker. His starter was a Piplup that is now an Empoleon. His Mismagius likes to stay out of her Pokeball and by Kuma's side. Kuma's full name actually means Bear Wrath. He's sturdy in frame. Kuma hates to lose.

Aw. I forgive you! But I'm also a very patient and understanding gal when it comes to writing fanfic. Lol. I, too, need to start working on my own fanfics. Haven't updated since...um, well, I guess you get the point. I just get hooked on so many fanfics and lately I've been into Transformers and all that good jazz, but anyways, I forgive you with my whole heart! I hope to read the next up and coming addition to "Just a Goal"! Can't wait! *gives thumbs up* Keep up the good work! OH! And I ended up changing my Username from Trixanity to Devious Little Fox. So if you don't recognize the username, don't panic. It's still me, at least I hope I'm still me...but then again, that's debatable...Lol. Good Luck, my friend! =^_^=

Sounds cool! Keep it up!

This Chapter was so totally awesome! I wonder what Team Rocket want with Corryn? *pouts* I guess I just have to wait and find out in the up coming chapter, don't I? Oh well, I can wait. I really liked this chapter. It was funny! Keep up the good work!

That was so totally AWESOME! I almost thought that Kiki was Joey for Yugioh at first. Kiki was a blast! Althought that one part...*shudders* But none the less enjoyable. Great Work! And Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while.

Name: Kysa
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Pokemon: Growlithe(Flare), Raichu(Shock), Pidgeot(Whirlwind) and Charizard(Flame)
Personality: Friendly, quiet
Wearing: Black T-shirt, black cargo pants, black sneakers
Other: Loves battling, slightly competitive. All of her Pokemon wear a green stone around their necks on a black string. She has small flames on each of her Pokemon's Pokeballs.

Phew, finally finished! Really great so far! May I be in the story also? Here's my trainers info:

Name: Cassie Navy

Fav. Poke type: Water

Pokemon: Vanessa, Vaporean; Gary, Gyarados; Lilani, Lapras; Starla, Staryu

Description: Age 11. Has red hair and deep sea blue eyes. Wears a blue shirt with wave print designs, a pair of white capris with blue rhinstones circling the legs, a long glittlery silver scarf tied around her waste and plain white sneakers

Personality: Calm and quiet,usually serious. She isn't the type of person who goes spastic and wierdo on people. Very passive and out-of-the-way. Kinda shy but is no push over. She's an expert swimmer and wears a solid blue bathing suit under her clothes.

Story: Aspires to travel the world and collect water pokemon. Also wants to complete the Kanto League challenges later on in her life.

Sweet story! I ain't done yet but so far so good!

I LOVED it! Totatlly awesome! Keep up the good work! Looking forward to an update.

Name: Trixanity Slive (Likes to go by Trixie)
Age:16
Poke. Type: Psychic, Fire, Flying, Dragon, Dark
Personality: Can be very random at times, acts boyish, very protective of her friends, always energetic, willing to help out others, loves to make people smile, keeps a cool head in rough situations, will get aggressive it need be.
Description: Short orange hair, dark orange bangs slightly covering left eye, violet eyes, approx. 5'7", very slim, green bandana on head, purple shirt that shows stomach with a shorter green shirt underneath, faded blue jeans, black wristbands, black and red shoes.
Pokemon:
Mindstream- Espeon(male)
Vulpentine- Ninetails(female)
Jetstream- Pigeot(male)
Destiny- Dragonair(female)
Calamity- Absol(male)
Story: She comes from New Bark Town, starting her journey there with her trusty Eevee. She has completed the Jhoto League Challenge and is currently working on the Kanto League Challenge. She normally travels by herself, but when offered, she'll travel with other people. Along her journey, she has met and caught many different pokemon, but favoring these five. She's met Lugia and Ho-Oh, as well as Articuno, Moltres, and Zapdos. Articuno kind of adopted her while she was at Mt. Silver. She never caught it but it follows her around at times.

If you would add her, that would be wonderful, it would be even greater if she actually got to travel with Corryn and Kieran. Thank you, if you add her! If not, I still thank you for tolerating this. >^_^

trainer.
name: Jack Row
Personality: Quit
Description: Silver spiked hair, sleeveless white shirt and gray baggy Jeans, and Black shoes.
Pokemon:
Beedrill-male
Nidoking-male
Rattata-Female * this is his starter pokemon and strongest. Also instead of its normal color of purple and white, its fur on it back is gold and the fur on it stomich is white.

Update soon!

Tranier: if needed
Name: Will
Age:16
Poke. Type: Bug, grass, and Rock Types
Personality: Joyful, Funny, Great Cook
Description: Gray Spiked hair, White sleeveless shirt, Gray baggy pants, white backpack, black shoes.
Pokemon:
Gray(Onix)-male
Wire(Tangula)-male
Drill(Beedrill)-female

Cool Chapter. ^-^! I want more! =3

Quote: Anyways, CrossDagger/Raiette Mirage, your egg is going to be… very cool. :D.
Reply: =D

me: TEAM ROCKET MUST DIE!
alex: she just had smores and she is wicked hyper.
aireon: i say we lock her up in a cage so that the candy trance can wear off.
alex: fine by me.
aireon: *locks her in a cage*
alex: anyway, i hate team rocket-
me: TEAM ROCKET MUST DIE!!
alex:... so i would run out of the cave as well.
me: i would stand and fight... fist to fist.
alex: she is kinda violent if she is angry. one time, she scratched her sister out of pure anger, and her sister started bleeding O.O.
me: what! she made me angry. we love youre story! hope you update soon! bye for now!!

Great story! Oh my character!

Name: Josh Sun
Age: 16
Hometown: Lilycove City, Hoenn
Personality: arrogant but can be a trusted friend and strong allie.
Description: Blue eyes with gold hair that goes down to his lower back. He wears a white long sleeve t-shirt and gold jeans. He has a backpack that’s gold with orange stripes. He also has a necklace with his sister in it.
Pokemon:
Swampert
Kirlia
Tish/Exploud
Plusle(This one was Josh’s starter pokemon and strongest and most trusted. He has the same personality as his trainer. He doesn’t like to be confined in side of a pokeball, so he travails along side Josh.)
Life story:
He doesn’t have a good relationship with his parents and cant see his sister because his parents throw him out of his house. That’s when he mat Plusle, whose life was almost the same as his. That was when he was 13.
He doesn’t like to talk about his parents or little sister. Oh, he was a former Team Rocket General ,but dosent like talk about that.