Oh my... so beautiful written. It's really something. I like it a lot. So emotional and touching. Really great. Marvelous(v)

WOW. You've been on FFN for 10 years? Love the fic, btw.

This is great! I'm going to favorite it because it is not only beautiful but one of the first stories/poems on this site! Though I wish I knew what the first story is there's really no way to tell...Still this is great.

Oh my gods... I... I truly am at a loss for words. Nothing could describe the pure and sad beauty of this poem. No, not poem. Emotion. Insight. Demando (Mando-sama) is usually made into the cold lifeless prince who just wants Sailor Moon/Usagi/Serenity for her looks and to kill all of the senshi and etc, but this beautiful poem is wonderfully written, so you can almost see inside Mando-sama's mind as he thinks this stuff. It took me five minutes to get over the pure shock of this poem and I beg of you to write more poems or stories like this. It will be impossible to create such a wonderufl work of poetry, but anything even a sliver of this beauty will be something that readers will treasure in their hearts and minds forever. For those who dislike Demando abit because of his cruelness, remember: Even darkness can have a shimmering light. Even the cruelest of people can long for love. And even the coldest of ice princes' can have a pure and glowing warmth.

Arigatou

Tenshi665

(Please read my story. I know this seems out of place with this review, but I have to get people to read it. It's called 'Angel In The Snow' by Tenshi665. Right now it seems all fun and games and love and stuff, but within a few more chapters, there will be serious and emotional moments.)

Oh my gods... I... I just don't know what to say... The Black Moon Family is my favorite groups of villians and seeing this... People so often put Demando (Mando-sama) as the evil jerk you just wants Sailor Moon/Usagi/Serenity for her looks and wants to rule the Moon and blahdy-blahdy-blah. I absolutley love it when people show the more sensitve side of Mando-sama. Even pain can be beautiful. Even darkenss can have a shimmering light. And even the coldest ice prince can have warmth in his heart. It took me five minutes to get over the shock of such a beautiful poem... no, not a poem... EMOTION. In here, you can see Mando-sama's true pain over the lost of his only blood relative, his savior, his sanctuary. Saffiru... I give this a ten, no matter what. If someone were to kill me unless I gave you a lower number, I still would not change it.

Arigatou for this beautiful emotion.

Tenshi665

(Please read my story everyone. It will seem all happy-go-lucky, fun and games and love right now, but within a few chapters, there will be much more emotional moments.)

I'm a big Sapphire/Diamond fan but...that was so sad!

Aww. . . poor Dimando. *sigh* I always did enjoy him. He was such an angsty guy. V. pretty rose imagery-the last two lines were absolutely perfect. The weird thing is, I wrote a poem from Saffir's POV about-you got it-flowers. *shakes head* Why is it that people think of flowers when they think of these two? Ah, go fig. Wonderful poem; beautiful insight into Dimando. Brava.

Very profound. I usually don't read stuff from Demando's POV, but this was exceptional.

I don't know the first thing about Sailor Moon but i can truely say that this is a great poem. My sister went missing July 2001 this year and this is exactly how i feel. (read extracts from my journal, 'Hell and Back')

that was sooo sweeet!

That was excellent! The analogy was perfect, and it seemed completely IC! I absolutely loved it! Kudos! You should really write more poetry!

I LOVE this poem. :)

OH! I love this poem. Sweet, slighty sappy and most importantly, filled with angst!

My Gods . . . Some things are just impossible to comment on without seeming like it's a tangled mess of words and nothing more, and this is one of those moments. Stupendous poetry, and the emotions were captured well. A true insight to Dimando's feelings about Saffir's death . . . tragic, longing to make up for the mistakes . . . Gah, too many things can describe this! I don't think I'm going to attempt it any further!

*releases a sigh of utter contentment; looks starry-eyed* how beautiful! pleeeeze write more like this one.