~wowee, tht was really good. love ur writing style ^-_^
~it leaves me wondering wat kind of mischeivious acts ed would have done if he had his limbs fixed earlier ;)

Oh god...I can just imagine how mortified Al would be...wow. I loved this! Fantastic lemon!

Very nice piece of work Sere. A shame that I did not read this little gem earlier.

I read this on DeviantART, but lost the link. I'm glad I found it again!

I really loved the interaction between Edward and Winry. It was well-written and fun. Good job!

...I liked that :) A little long, but stillo good. 8 stars from Da Who

that was incredibly entertaining...especially the auto-erotic joke. perverted yet funny.

This story was absolutely mind-shattering. You had very few English errors, conventional or not. The story was excellently organized. You captured each character's attitude and personality so well to the point that it seemed you were the creator of FMA. I'll keep an out for your work.

OMG! XD Go Wenry! This was so hilarious, poor confused Al. *goes to read The Tune-Up*

*chuckles* Nice!

Best Lemon I've ever read. If Ed and Winry ever did make love, this is probably how it would happen!

Loved it. I love the whole series!
little chemist

Yes, I am breaking my habit of Just reading and actually reviewing.

The story is top notch when it comes to spelling and Grammar, but what I love most is the honesty. As a fellow woman (I'm assuming you are), I truely do appreciate the fact that you are writing a mature, stigma free, and realistic physical relationship. I'm not sure it would even qualify as a lemon, because those are (typically) 1)fluffy or 2) porn. Your story goes deeper into the emotions of the characters and provides a narrative, rather than smut.

Also, Kudos on writing a fic that promotes safe sex(at the end at least). Granted, I would have liked it if Ed shared some responsibility, but I'm guessing condoms don't exist there. Plus, it really does seem more fitting that Winry deals with it. It just seems very 'in character' for her, like she doesn't want to place another burden on Ed...or something.

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oh my god!! :D this was SO good ;P loved the story, can't wait to read the other ones ;D i just can't get how you write these so good :D i'm just gonna have this HUGE smile for the rest of the day now ;)

my god XD that was fun. lol. another fav. as author too, I really like your writing.

Woah. Immense writing. xD I loved the EdWin take, it was amazing. I've also read the sequel - Overhaul 2, Of Ballet and Bullets, erm...A Betting Crowd. I'm looking forward to Chapter fifteen for Of Ballet...

Keep up the AMAZING writing. you're my role model in life. xDD