Glinda was wonderfully in character.

Hm, it's pretty good. Just a few things, though:

1. I don't think Galinda would go so far as to call Elphaba a freak. Remember, Galinda is the good girl.
2. I don't think Elphaba would be so open with her father. Nessarose is the favorite and Elphaba's trying to earn her father's respect and I don't think she would want to tell her father about her vision. He's a very religious man and may consider it to be witchcraft or something like that.