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Blondie724
2009-06-17 . chapter 17
-sniffle-
That Was Beautiful!
asianxsmartie
2009-04-23 . chapter 17
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hinata2014
2009-03-14 . chapter 17
yay kakashi is alive and so is sakura
is there going to be sequal about there marrige and the baby
hinata2014
2009-03-14 . chapter 15
sasukes idea was good
hinata2014
2009-03-14 . chapter 14
is he really dead please tell me he isn't
hinata2014
2009-03-14 . chapter 13
why did he have to die
hinata2014
2009-03-05 . chapter 2
poor sakura :( at least she has naruto and kakashi
Fuyuyume
2009-01-20 . chapter 17
hm how come it doesn't say complete. Good story quickened ending.
IAmNotANut
2007-12-23 . chapter 1
hahahaha! It's great because he IS like her father... hehe. He knows it's wrong but still...
I don't mean to be awkward but I LOVE Kakashi. he's definately one of my top characters. I wouldn't pair him with Sakura, I'll leave that to you, but it's still very fun to read!
Thanks!
IAmNotANut
Nikki Hatake
2007-11-16 . chapter 17
plz make a sequel! i LOVE this story!
InARealPickle
2007-08-22 . chapter 17
It was a pretty good story line. You're right some of it did feel a bit rushed. Probably including more detailed descriptions would help with that. I do like that your writing is coherent. You wouldn't believe that amount of fanfics I quit reading because the writer couldn't form a complete sentence. Also, you actually finished your story which is GREAT! Too many people on here get half way through a great story and then leave their audience hanging. So, here is a big THANK YOU for actually completing what you started. :)
InARealPickle
2007-08-21 . chapter 10
I just HATE HATE HATE HATE Sasuke
Please please PLEASE have him die slowly and painfully SOON
narutoinuyashalover22
2007-07-29 . chapter 17
lol definately a little rushed you could of stretched that into like three chapters lol but i really loved this story you did a really good job! lol
stefanie
2007-07-14 . chapter 17
OMG!OMG!!OMG! I LUV THIS STORY!
amyXD
2007-07-08 . chapter 17
Dude
I want a sequel.
Yesh.
And this has got to be the cutest story ever made.
Yep.
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