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Reviews For: Lost Passage

redlace76
2007-02-28
ch 1,
abuseExcellent homage to what came before... such a wonderful job. I think it also takes supreme talent to write a sex scene that is just base enough to be hot, but not vulgar. Sexy, but not crass. I wondered during the first story and into this one if that could be the chink in your literary armor... but to my delight, that wasn't the case (thank God ;) ). You are consistently on the money here... once again. Thanks again for the sharing of your considerable talent...
leddy
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseWonderful follow-up fic. I like the fact that everything wasn't perfect for them, it took a lot of time and therapy to make things better.

It sounds like a wonderful place they visited and finally found some peace. Great job.
LosingInTranslation
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was a fantastic, and realistic follow up piece to "Waiting by the River." Awesome work!
jtbwriter
2006-07-04
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazing-the pain and anguish-you caught all the
emotions and love that somehow kept Gris and Sara together!

And this place-the healing it brought is so vivid-thanks
for a very tough but good read! I look forward to your
next story!
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