good chappie overall but you spelt sinnoh, Shinou

Nice story! keep up the good work! =>

DOES DREW ** OUT ROSES OR SUMIN COZ HE ALWAYS HAS THEM!

that was a really cool story!

what is it? if it's like cabbage cake or something i'll probably puke...

my favourite eevee evoulution is glaceon or leafeon...

SWEET!

Like it.

Awsome story. I love it!

I love this! May's in Drew's house!


Nice work :)

xKinaMariex

WIEEW, I really liked your story,

Hillary, though, annoyed the hell out of me, how'd you get her so infuriating annoying?

Well, keep writing on

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL! YOU HAVE TO WRITE ABOUT MAY'S NEW JOURNEY!

I likey the night meetings.
They're super chute.
Too bad telling you this now won't make a difference to the story.
-cries-
X3
~R2R

love it

I loved that story!
Brilliant start, brilliant end and brilliant story :D
It had me on the edge of my seat the whole way through