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Reviews For: Looking Down the Aisle

38039
2006-07-15
ch 1,
abuseawesome job mate! you write the best NS stories out there...
Aimeesworld
2006-07-10
ch 1,
abuseI very much liked this (and all your fics, which I am too lazy to review at present ... one day). It's difficult writing Grissom's point of view and you managed it beautifully, without getting caught up in angst and hoopla like that. I liked the way Grissom and Sara's relationship disintegrated. Not with a bang, but with a whimper. I liked how they all moved to different places, then came together at the end.

The Nick/Sara and Cath/Warrick didn't hurt either.
krisnina77
2006-07-09
ch 1,
abuseVegas does have a tendency to attract muses but it's trying to find which hotel they're at that becomes the fun part. Anyway though I really loved the fic! You did a great job with Grissom and did keep him in character! I liked how you explained everyone's lives and what happened to them. Great job!
CSIFan4Life
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseThis fic was really good. I think you did a good job keeping Grissom in charater. I really like how the story was layed out and how you started with Grissom talking about his wedding but then went back and explained everything. I'm sorry to hear your summer hasn't been going that good. I hope it improves for you and that you are able to write some more. I have always liked everything you write.
Windy City Dreamer
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseQuite wonderfully written, a completely believable and entertaining tale. I love the way you wrote Grissom, in character, but with a level of humanity and realness not usually seen on the show. Love how you made it quite evident that things were how they should be and managed to keep things from getting sappy like so many wedding-based stories. Excellent job.
The Notorious Cat
2006-07-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseAbsolutaly fabulous!

I really loved it - Grissom was amazing here!

Fantastic job - The Notorious Cat
PandorasHollow
2006-07-06
ch 1,
abuseI loved it. you did a wonderful job at portraiting Grissom. Many ff-writers describe Grissom as cold or heartless, something I never agreed on. I'm glad to see that you describe him as a person with fears and weaknesses, as someone who's quite simply human.

I, of course, loved the snickerish parts of the story and the bits and pieces of Greg/Sara/Nick friendship.
A great story.
SistaSouljah
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was exactly what I needed after sitting for an 8 hour exam today. And I thought you wrote Grissom perfectly. Not many people can. But you can, because you rock. Of course, all I really needed was Nick/Sara and Warrick/Cath, but the Grissom parts were good too. :)
Shimigirl
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was a great story! I'm happy with the way things turned out in your story too! I loved it
bauerfreak
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseWhew!! What a lot of drama! IT was really interesting staying in Grissom's head the whole time, and listening to his explanation of his relationships with everyone. I think you did a great job at keeping all his thoughts in character - it was all very believable.

Wow! Hardly any dialogue, and it was still REALLY interesting!! I'm glad you could get this out; I love reading all your stuff, and hope your summer gets to going better! :)

Hanna
Jenny70529
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseAww, it was so sweet. Even if there was way too much Grissom for my liking. lol. Of course, any Grissom is usually too much for my liking. But I digress...

It was extremely well written and in character, a very good read! Great job! Of course, I find it hard to imagine something that you wrote *not* being totally awesome.

Jenny
myeverything02
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseI liked it a lot! It was a good way to look at how their lives could turn out (even though I am a total GSR fan!) and it was very well written.
~Ash~
bubble cat
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseWow, great write, never thought of this way abou Gris, but it make a lot of sense. We know, knew, Nick and Sara will make up the lost time,lol
n_s
forensicsfan
2006-07-04
ch 1,
abuseI loved this. You actually had me tearing up, but then again, it's been that sort of a week. Not bad exactly, just stressful and I'm all worried about MacGyver hiding under my bed with half the fireworks in the planet going off around my apartment and the whackos lighting them. I only hope that I can find where my Mojo has been hiding out (maybe I should borrow the Sodo Mojo the Mariners use, but then that's a Seattle thing and it's for baseball, I don't know if it would work for Snickers.) Again, this was wonderful, I think it was truly in character and well thougth out. Beautiful.
trogdorgirl88
2006-07-04
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this story. I mean REALLY. It's an original and it's great. On a personal note, I think it sounds like something they would do to end the series (which, thank God, has no end in sight). You did really good on this one. You kept everyone in character and some of the things you included seem like some underlying hints that might eventually surface. Time well spent. I'll be watchin'. This one is going in my favorites.
Thanks for the good read,
-Lindsay :)
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