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| Lexi Teniro 2007-06-28 ch 6,  | abuseDamn my delayed response and prolonged absence! DX But this chapter was just as good as the previous - I love how it touches on the darker part of Rakusha's personality without weighing down and becoming angsty. Is the fic really over? ;.; Please add another chapter? Maybe about Hibiki? |
| goofy_caffinated_guru 2006-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI lub Myobi one-shots! This certainly owned up to my expectations for one of my fav characters. ^0-0^ This story makes me think of the song Good Enough by Evanescence. I think you should look into it. Anywayz, good job and please continue! |
| Lexi Teniro 2006-10-08 ch 5, | abuseOh. Oh oh oh. REALLY like this one. The tone is so thoroughly Yui it's amazing. Can't wait for the next! ^^ |
| Cattitude 2006-09-13 ch 5, | abuseI love the title. (it suits him!) From what I remember of Yui, this describes him well. I like the structure of this chapter. However, I think it should be a semicolon connecting the last sentence in the first paragraph instead of a comma. That's all I felt I wanted to nitpick about. I'll have to think of a good flame and leave it later, how does that sound? :D |
| Lexi Teniro 2006-07-18 ch 4, | abuseNice, concise view on Tsugiri's feelings about the whole main plotline. I didn't like it quite as much as the others, but it was still excellent. :3 Please write more! |
| Lady Lilliana 2006-07-16 ch 4, | abuseOh, that's so sweet... you're ood at putting across thoughts. |
| Lady Lilliana 2006-07-12 ch 3, | abuseI like this. Keep it going. |
| Necinco 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. So, your going to do every character? Thats cool! Good Luck, I'll stay posted! |
| Lexi Teniro 2006-07-06 ch 3, | abuseHmm...interesting. It's hard to say how I feel about this one, since the series hasn't told much about Enju. But I definitely like the way it's written, and the view you take on how he feels about the whole situation. All in all, I can't believe I'm the first reviewer of this fic. It's so wonderfully written. :D |
| Lexi Teniro 2006-07-06 ch 2, | abuseAww...so bittersweet! (I don't know where the "sweet" comes in, but that's me for you). I like how Myobi wasn't referred to so much as a "replacement" for Amiya as respected/cared for/loved in a different way. Great job on this one, too. :3 |
| Lexi Teniro 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I love the way you captured her feeling of "possession", so to speak, with the consistant "hers" and whatnot. And the way that transitioned to the question of Ryoko's feelings was quite beautiful. Great job. :) |