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Reviews For: Not Fair

Buick Regal Racecar 56 2007-05-17 ch 1,	abuseAw, so cute! Chickie just can't live without him...
Sassy Lil Scorpio 2007-04-02 ch 1,	abuseThis was really intersting--I've never thought of Cars slash before. I have to admit: I laughed in the beginning about Chick always always following King's backside. I don't think you meant it to be funny, but it was. This is a totally different take on the accident that Chick caused during King's last race. I never thought of them being together like that or that they are hiding their relationship. I like how you got both cars' dialogue down. Very nice work! I enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face.
MononokeShojo 2006-11-16 ch 1,	abuseThis is just awesome! You did a great job! At first I hated Chick but meanwhile I think he's ok... and I love The King! ^^ Thanks for this story!
She-Elf4 2006-08-21 ch 1,	abuseI don't like Chick Hicks, but your story makes him sound not so bad. I can't wait to read your other slashy one-shots. (As long as they're not Lightning/Sally.)
Narakus-Mate 2006-07-07 ch 1,	abuseI loved your story. When I read the summary, i thought it would be terrible, but I was proven wrong. This is an exeilent story! I want you to perhaps change your mind on this and make it an actual story, insted of a one shot. ~N~M~
Amphitrite II 2006-07-05 ch 1,	abuseOh, I liked this. I really liked this. One would think that a pairing like this (which I'm now thinking of writing) would require at least one of them to be extremely OOC, but you did a great job! It just felt so...right. The "He was head over tail CRAZY about him" and "'HANG Cassie. I want a kiss from th’ car I LOVE'" parts were so adorable they made me grin like a maniac. The dialogue was perfect. Aah, the entire thing was just too cute. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work! Keep up the great writing. :)
Wingofan_2006 2006-07-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice one!

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