it's kinda funny really. LOL

not to burst your bubble but this seems similar to another story i read on they probably plagerised you, or vise versa.

The story was great but the ending sucked.

It was stupid how you didn't finish it.

You should have writen more.

That was dumb.

Why didn't you add more?

You should have let Bra finish telling Vegeta about the nightmare.

And then have Vegeta comferte Bra and tell her everything was okay or something.

Then ending you put was stupit.

That endind was dumb. You should have added more to it.

THIS IS SO GOOD! I AM ABSOLUTEL GOING TO CRY IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! THIS IS ON MY STORY ALERT LIST!

this made laugh
nice

AHA! Finally got around to doing this!
Er-hem.
Now, I don't usually watch DBZ (hell, I know nothing of it) but this was quite good. Though Bra is a weird name O.o
The emotion was raw and tangible, and I liked that, cookies for you and your sister. I'm off to go download summore Billy pics, g'bye!

loves,
anila!

This is well written...except I don't understand how bra would dream about Goku's personality like that when he isn't even close to being like that...but then again...it's a dream. Please write more! I think this could be something great!

creepy. but i liked it anyway! it was cool, even though i really don't picture Vegeta saying "baby" or "chici" to anyone...oh well. keep up the good work!