Reviews for XFives Are Alive

sibyl411
2006-07-05
ch 1,

abuseI could tell you did your research for this story, I was impressed, I know you read "Dark Angel: Before the Dawn" and did you perhaps use the website http://w.southern-oracle.

It's a great site. I love when authors put in real research for stories, it just gives it that extra something. Good story.

candyabble
2006-07-05
ch 1, anon.

abuseWow that was incredible. Good Manticore fics with Max and her unit before the escape are so rare. I know I'm gonna be reading this over and over again.

“Give this soldier a smaller weapon or don’t complain until I grow a few feet!” the little soldier snapped out, belatedly adding, “sir!”

That line was awesome! And so MAX! Yeah the consequences were harsh but the good consequences of naming herself and the others was worth the beating.

Thank you so much for sharing this.

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