| Reviews for The Broken's Lament |
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Thorn on a Rose 7/7/06 . chapter 1It almost seems that this is the poem of a lot of people/figures in the world. People who we know of but have never met and soon even our memory of them fades and they exist no more... Sad but as always beautifully written! Great Job! Till Next Time, ToaR PS-sorry I haven't been reviewing as much! I've been moving family and myself*-* Don't worry! I'll catch up on the reviews...soon. |
aserene 7/5/06 . chapter 1wow. i really really like the last stanze...don't ask why, it just sounds nice together. and it flows very nicely. |
Richforce 7/5/06 . chapter 1nice job |