Very good not want I was thing it was but the story was good.

Interesting story!

Faith

I read it all in one go. Wow. I haven't actually read, er, watched the show but still, the writing's good and the story, so sad but I guess there's hope with an ending that's "not the end." I did find some of it creepy, ie. the part when Janus says he pretends it's not Estrelania and Jesse is so much like his mother.Yeah, anyway, nice job.

Way trippy. Cool story!

you read and reviewed my fic (memory lane) What do you propose I do. I haven't been able to watch Jq for over 3 yrs. what I wrote was my own opionion and so far no one has complianed about it. (I'm not trying to sound mean ok? I just want to know) E-mail me at or

Mousey

Very nicely written. Interesting new character. interesting situation & interactions.

This is an interesting story. It isn't very easy to follow though. You don't differenciate between the past and the present. Maybe that's why a lot of ppl haven't been reviewing. It was just too difficult to follow.

that was so sad, you should really do a sequel, i loved the story.

Not bad. personally I rather Jesse and Jonny fics.. but thats just my hopeless romantic side shining.. I like the plot so far, reminds me of Charmed in a way.

good story please continue and sooon

Geez, It's not like I ment to take them with me, grumble, grumble. Any how I loved it as usual so keep on writing kay? Now, ... That was coool!

Evident here is the ability to tell a story without telling a story , and by that I mean that the reader is aware of a story line created by the interplay of the characters so the readers own imagination is brought into play to add and supply the untold, but hinted between the main chatacter (Janus) and the mysterious visitor! BRAVO! We Love you! ! MR. and MRS. Shad!

We Loved the story, and laughed out loud at the description about being stuck with the claustrophobic teenager in the cave. It sure scared the heck out of us LOL! Seriously, very good and a very obvious talent for story telling. Speelburg should be made aware! Truly, we are very impressed at your gift and look foreward to future trips of the imagination! Fun!Love and stuff! Mr. and Mrs. Shad!

Hiya! Love this whole little series. Keep writing...Umm...Yeah. Umm...JANUS IS CUTE. Yeah. Bye bye. *laughs*

This is me saying that I'm sorry the format is all screwy, I'll try to fix it later