 AneleTiger 2006-08-27 . chapter 1Wow, this was good. I think you have a great idea for this fic, you should definitively (sorry, can't spell) continue with this. You could go so many ways! Oh, and you should have a short story about the woman that the Avatar fell in love with, that would be very interesting...But I have so say, you really did this one well, especially with Washi's daughter appearing. Yup, Koh is evil, but an interesting character. As the last chapter of this story you should have him reflect on all the faces he's stolen and how that has affected him. So, update! :) |