Well I thought it wa good so far, but if you feel that it isn't working for you then I gauss you can restart it, You are the Auther and its your decision wether or not to continue or not.
I will leave the decision up to you.

Hey yo! Yes, you out there! I know you have probably given this story up for dead and put it six feet under but I was really enjoying it. And it wasnt too lame. You have a flare for writing that doesnt show up in a great deal of people. It saddened my that this has ended the way it did but I hope you do end up publishing something! If it is anything like this Ill bge on the look out for it. :) Cioa!

I liked the story but later on it did seem to trail away from Hellsing and Integra.

You're AxI scenes were actually really impressive. I think you should write a full on AxI story one day!

good luck!
~SWD

You could end it there and then later make a sequal. But I would love to see how this plays out. Good luck with the new job!! Hope you write more soon! PLEASE!!??

Hello.
I like this fic (_Oblivion_). It's true that, like many fiction addicts, I will read almost anything just for the sake of having something to read, but I do have my mediocrity threshold, and please know that you are stepping more than highly enough to avoid tripping over it.

I have no fics on FFN as of yet; I am trying to figure out how to do one or several involving multiple dimensions (I like Michael Moorcock's term "multiverses"), some space/time travel, and cultural and other connections spanning multiple planes of existence -- hence my interest in _Oblivion_.

The only problems that I can see are
1. punctuational (mainly a tendency toward errors with commas. For example: those used in the "listing" function (meaning lists of members of a group. For example: "Seras, Alucard, and Integra"; that second comma is important).
2. Developmental ((a)some characters could use more development; what are Megami's scruples and her reasons for them, for example? (b)The canon characters are probably already so well known that probably not much extra development save for that which pertains to the fic's plotline would be necessary, and not much more of that that you have already done, but you might look it over as per the norm).

I tend to do lots of skipping around when I read, so I may have missed the developmental parts that I mentioned above. You still might want to take a look at them anyway.

Please don't stop the fic; that cliffhanger with Chiron plotting to turn "that little demon" practically begs for at least ONE more chapter, if not three or four! :o).

Somewhere in Texas,

Senor Coyote

I liked it. I say continue or if you don't want to at least make a final chapter and end it half way.

Hello, this is my first time reading this story and I think it is very well done and would like to read more of it ^_^

Hey! Your story is great! I haven't reviewed because my English writting is not very good ;/ But I like this fanfiction very much and I would like to read next chapters! Please do not stop writing! ;) greetings ;)

Serious sincerely very terrible that you did not continue, history to taken a full course that has made it interesting and to one from knowledge curiosity that follows. In truth it moves much to me when I saw that actualisaste TT_TT, continuous apparently please

Short but good. Keep it up!

This story is awesome! ^_^ I'm now wondering what will happen next!Keep up the wonderful work!


~Lady Hellsing~

Very good. Update soon. ^_^

YAY!you didnt give up on the story as you said!! oh im so happy!xD Megami-sama after if you have could you e-mail me your msn?i was triing to write a fic but i dont know if the part i already wrote is good and i wanted to know if you could read it and tell me...>_< i wanted my story to go out as good as all of yours... ^,_ ^ again,love your stories!

wow! if that you were delayed in updating your fanfic, that exasperating is to wait for T-T, I already die by knowledge that is what follows O.O I enchant this I capitulate much and I hope you do not undergo a blockade of ideas, T-T you do not delay please!

About time XD Great chapter, can't waot to see what happens next.