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| Darlene 2007-07-20 ch 7, anon. | abuseI must say out of a lot of the story’s I read this is one of the most well written story I have read... great job! |
| FIRE129 2007-04-16 ch 6,  | abusePlease, Please Update this story A.S.A.P thankx FIRE129... |
| toyo 2007-04-13 ch 2, anon. | abusehi |
| Cinnamon-lilys 2006-10-02 ch 5, | abuseRight more!! |
| Nevermore The Living 2006-09-26 ch 5, | abuseHe he. Poppy! I love that name. Aren't plane bathrooms too small to sit in? Oh! Are they in first class? You killed off Cassidy! That is so unfair! Oh well... What about Jesse though? Hehe. Are they gonna crash? And die? I hope so... or not. I'm sure they'll crash though. Maybe find cannibalistic survivors of the last plane crash! Hehe, Hehe... |
| Squiby-J 2006-09-25 ch 5, | abuseHEY!! YAY great chap:D! aw poor rick!! i hope the gang do somethin nice 4 him! poor rick:( and... oh make sure no-one dies!! Do you go on max walkers forum? love jordy ps update soon!! |
| Squiby-J 2006-09-22 ch 4, | abusehey! good choice:D lol cant wait for the chap! love jordy |
| Squiby-J 2006-07-29 ch 3, | abusehey hey hey! good chapter sorry it took me awhile to read it.. oh and nope i didnt think they would get together... or want them to... ew lol i havent read the new reviews but if nevermore the raven hasnt told u im pretty sure its megan O'Connor... dont no how to spell it though lol girls name hey... eh um sitting in my loungeroom with my parents around i told them i needed a quirky girls name ( haha) got some funny ones gertrude, pixie, marylou, polly ana , twiggy, poppy,bumbleena(BAHAHHAHAHA) i didnt come up with these! lol what about Mally?? or.. umm Jodie, holly anyway good chapter cya! jordy |
| Nevermore The Living 2006-07-28 ch 3, | abuseO'Connor. :) Hm... Girl's names... A quirky girl's name? I've always liked Kaily/Kally. Or Kaitlin. Something quirkier could be... um... I really don't know. Patty? Yay! I'm most critical! Woo! Oh, yeah, in the story you put "were are now", but it should be "we are now" or "we're now". |
| Squiby-J 2006-07-18 ch 2, | abusehey, great chapter! this is going to be a weird story, and i thought it was cute sonny went to rick hehe:D |
| Nevermore The Living 2006-07-18 ch 2, | abuseIf Rick goes on the trip too you could always have him giving really weird theories on what could have happened. Gross ideas work too. Yeah, sorry, more names spelt wrong. Sonny is spelt like Sunny. Adeena is actually spelled like Adena. Does Nate even know they exist? He never met Megan and Sebatien, and he arrived a long time after they died, and their friends greived. You may want to explain that. |
| UnitedPen 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseReally well done. Interesting beginning. I want to read more so keep it up! |
| Squiby-J 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abusehey great story!! please update ASAP! |
| Nevermore The Living 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseGood start, but I just thought I'd let you know that it's not very attracting to have author notes in the middle of a story. Just scroll up and edit it if you forgot something. Anyway, this will probably be pretty good once it gets farther into the story. I'll try to keep up with the story and review every chapter, but if I don't, sorry. P.S. I just thought I'd let you know that you spelled a lot of names wrong. Here are the correct spellings on th ones you misspelled. Cody Myers Adeena Tanis Sebastien Hope you update soon. |