 TB 2009-11-20 . chapter 20 Phenomenal |
 Falcon-Jade-Darkness 2009-11-08 . chapter 20That was...amazing, one of the best fanfics I've had the pleasure of reading. The main protagonists' personalities, the appearances of other support characters, the court case, the ending twist, they were all very well written. I do hope you continue writing more of these Phoenix Wright fanfics! |
 anon 2009-10-28 . chapter 10 haha! reference to Trauma Center! |
 Lizza 2009-10-24 . chapter 11 Ah, I'm loving this story so much. At first, I had a hard time keeping track of the arson victims, but them I made a little chart, so it makes sense. This is such a complex story, it could be a real case in the game!
I really like the Trauma Center refrences. XD The first time I read this I hadn't played Trauma Center, but now I have. And it makes me happy. He really was overseas... |
 riceandXDs 2009-09-25 . chapter 20Fantastic. It's everything I've looked for in a Miles x Phoenix fic: mature, in-depth characterization, strong plot, and this story truly amazed me. Super writing too; it's extremely realistic and non-idealistic (lol?). I think I almost cried during the middle/end, but I'm not too sure.
Please, continue writing! |
 Lizza 2009-08-21 . chapter 5 Ahh, I'm rereading this story (it's just that awesome!) and this chapter foreshadows furture events so well. >v< Ne I love this story! It's the best fanfiction I've ever read! Even if you're not a huge Phoenix x Edgeworth fan, I think anyone into Ace Attorney would love the first chapters.
I love you forever! |
 Jikage 2009-07-27 . chapter 8Wow I really like how you bundled up all that anger into a hot make-out in the end. xD Anyway, what I really mean is that you have great skills in deciding when these two interact, but also giving consideration to your plot. :D |
 Jikage 2009-07-26 . chapter 6LOL when Edgeworth had said his Steel Samurai autograph was in there! I was like LOL. Your sorry ** was almost killed and you were worried about a AUTOGRAPH?! LMFAO! |
 Jikage 2009-07-26 . chapter 5I like how subtle the Edgeworth/Phoenix is. It gives me suspense and knowing that this relationship they have now might bud into something more. :D |
 Jikage 2009-07-26 . chapter 4I REALLY like how no matter how small, or little, you'd ALWAYS mention Edgeworth in each chapter. This is what a real fanfic is about. ^^ Gosh I missed reading this. |
 Jikage 2009-07-26 . chapter 3Aw man...So they broke up. <:] I like how realistic this story is. I could pretty much feel Phoenix's guilt pouring out at me. |
 Jikage 2009-07-26 . chapter 1My gosh, I haven't read this fanfic in such a long time, I almost forgot who Ayame/Iris was. Until I started playing the game again I immediately was reminded of this fic. I came back again, curious this time. I'm glad I did, I completely forgot the plot of this entire thing. *sigh* I'm happy I'm going to read it again, this will preoccupy me for the next few days. I'm glad to pick this up again. Yay for Edgeworth/Phoenix love! :D |
 Sailor Comet 2009-05-17 . chapter 20That was an excellent story. I was happy with the way you addressed Iris--um, Ayayme, I guess? Anyway, I was happy with the fact that she and Phoenix moved on to their separate lives in a reasonable manner, and that she wasn't just ignored or something. It's bothered me in other Phoenix/Miles fanfics, but since you addressed it I was able to enjoy this wonderful fic without reservation. All of their interactions, the way their relationship progresses, the development of the trial, everything is written really well. I liked reading it a lot. |
 graytabby 2009-05-12 . chapter 20Very well-characterised, and very hot too. :) |
 Jikage 2009-03-25 . chapter 20I sincerely loved how Phoenix was portrayed in this story, he still has that uncanny sense of justice some fanfictions seem to have lost here. Especially for Miles/Phoenix.
This story caught me on the very edge and the ending tied up all the loose ends. It is amazingly written and I can't seem to stop thinking about it.
Also, the sex scenes were actually extremely fun to read. xD |