great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

PLESSE UPDATE! Pretty please? :(

PLEASE update! please add chp 5!

amazing i want more . . . please

I really like the story so far! Do you think we could see that in the coach's POV?

AGABUGABUGA! That measn "OMG THIS STORY ROCKS MORE!!" In babble.

Please update soon, I'm going crazy!

This is an awesome story, keep up the good work!

hey, great story. i liked it alot. update soon,k. later dude.

This really is an awesome story! PLEASE update this as soon as you can! Softball happens to be one of my favorite sports, (I play on the varsity team at my school now) And I'd really like to see how this ends!

that funny soo hurry up and CONTINUE PLEASE!

This story is great! Very original idea! Please update soon!

hehe funny

hello? um I am desperately waiting for an update for fastball. I love what I have read so far.

please continue