Great story, loved it. Your description of McKay's fear and desperation were very evocative and despite claustrophobia being one of the few phobias I *don't* have, I could really feel his panic. I love that all your stories are so well written, descriptive and unhurried.

Wow, that was intense. Outstanding fic. Last one I get to read until I watch the end of season 2 and the beginning of season 3 though :( This fic was so good I feel like I should say something else, but I can't think of anything :P I did love McKay's interactions with Ren, and McKay bullying Beckett out of his funk.

Bravo! Bravo!

That was FANTABOULOUS! You did really well on the characterization of everyone and oh the angst of it all!

It played out just like an episode and that, to me, is the mark of excellent fanfiction.

Again, bravo on a job very well done!

Keep writing like that and I'll definitely keep coming back for more!

Maja

*runs off to find out what else the loverly Tipper wote*

I was wondering when we were going to get back to Rodney . . . Yay Rodney angst!

MOREMOREMORE!

Maja

Just wanted to say quickly that I really love the way you wrote Rodney in this chapter! Very in character and Rodney-ish!

Now on to the rest of the story! (Which I totally anticipate loving! Yayz!)

Maja

Again, a wonderful story. Don't have time for a longer review at the moment as I have to go (just HAD to finish reading your story). So just know that I loved it!

I loved it!

Just read it all the way through.

Great fic.

:D

A fantastic tale! Nail-biting suspense and an extremely satisfying uncoiling of all that ratcheted excitement. Thanks for the wonderful read.

I like this story a lot and have reread it several times since first reading. Think the villains are very original.
However, I think the part with Sheppard saying "he's only 12 years old," as a reason Ren would not hurt anyone is out of character. Any soldier that served in the Middle East knows the next suicide bomber could be a kid, or the sniper on the roof could be a kid. Someone else should have made that comment-would have made it more believable.

OH what an amazing story! had me at the edge of my seat , couldn't get up until I finish it, I went thru all kind of emotions, first angry at that Horrible monster of a "girl" and what they did to Poor Carson...it was really! like kicking a puppy...Carson!! the man is the sweetest person in the whole pegasus galaxy!! (*sobbing thinking of Sunday** I'll never forgive them for doing that*) I fell Sad thinking of Poor Mckay! and dispair when Sheppard was Yelling at Rodney trying to reach him in his catatonic state...and then How can you EVER forgive the damage those boys did, and the Geni! they deserve a nuke been deliver thru the gate...bastards!! and then the whole dealing with the aftermath and poor Carson comming to grasp with what happen...and Rodney helping him in his own unique way...BRAVO !
*standing ovation* Bravo, everyone who loves SGA should read this gripping story. Bravo!
Must read more of your work.

This story was amazing!

To tell you the truth I overlooked it a couple of times because of the heading & the story summary but decided to read it on a whim. I couldn't stop - it was that exciting!

Great job, keep writing & I see gold stars for you with everything you do.

You were one of my fave M7 writers (especially your 4K AU) and now you're a genius with SGA as well! Super great work!

I really adore Garron and Ren here and I'm reviewing in the hopes that you'll write them back in later fics. Freya really is just unnerving and very heartbreaking. And poor Rodney-man, that Jumper scene with Sheppard was very well done--you could really feel Shep's desperation and fear.

Anyway, I wish you a very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year and hope to see more of your work in the new year!

Wow, if only they filmed this. Thanks.

"Actually," Ronon rumbled from his seat, "I think you're exact words were along the lines of, 'we're doomed,' 'we're never getting out of here,' and 'oh God, we're all going to die.'"

I loved that line! That and Beckett begging McKay to eat his food. Laughed out loud, caused my cat to look at me with some concern. Heh. Actually I loved the whole story. The personalities of each member is brought to life perfectly, and the playful banter between Sheppard and McKay is right on the money. Thanks for another wonderful story, as always I look forward to the next one.

*Gives a standing ovation till hands hurt* loved this story! the first chapter had laughter tears streaming down my face! Brill story! kept me hooked!