 Long live Warhammer40k 2006-12-09 . chapter 2I like it |
 GamerJay 2006-11-19 . chapter 2This story's great. Avatar and Warhammer 40K, the most unlikeliest crossover ever.
You should have the Imperium appear and help out the Earth Kingdom and the Water Tribe. Wonder what it would be like with the Imperial Guard taking on the Fire Nation?
Anyway, keep up the good work. |
 K1092000 2006-07-09 . chapter 2Hmm, not bad. But it's really confusing. They entered the village and then... it kind of went down hill from there. I would suggest revising this. If you want some help I'll be glad to lend a hand. |
 Armorrizedragon73 2006-07-07 . chapter 2O__O, what's with you and not spacing? You Spacist or something?! geez... it wouldn't hurt to give credit to people ya know... blah...come up with more convincing paragraphs... |
 Armorrizedragon73 2006-07-07 . chapter 1O_O, what real point is this chapter? I kinda got lost when the people went to the village and everything went.. BLAH
You need to form your paragraphs better because, the consistancy of having to re-read the same sentence is getting quite annoying. You have spell check right? USE IT! and if you're gonna threaten to turn someone's house into a parking lot, decide to use correct grammer and spelling |