I like it

This story's great. Avatar and Warhammer 40K, the most unlikeliest crossover ever.

You should have the Imperium appear and help out the Earth Kingdom and the Water Tribe. Wonder what it would be like with the Imperial Guard taking on the Fire Nation?

Anyway, keep up the good work.

Hmm, not bad. But it's really confusing. They entered the village and then... it kind of went down hill from there. I would suggest revising this. If you want some help I'll be glad to lend a hand.

O_O, what's with you and not spacing? You Spacist or something? geez... it wouldn't hurt to give credit to people ya know... blah...come up with more convincing paragraphs...

O_O, what real point is this chapter? I kinda got lost when the people went to the village and everything went.. BLAH

You need to form your paragraphs better because, the consistancy of having to re-read the same sentence is getting quite annoying. You have spell check right? USE IT! and if you're gonna threaten to turn someone's house into a parking lot, decide to use correct grammer and spelling