 Warrior from beyond 1/12/03 . chapter 1That is so sweet. ALso you used some of the words that Future Trunks said himself. |
 fairysphinx 7/16/02 . chapter 1AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sweet! Definatly Future Trunks to Vegeta. *sighs and glomps Future Trunks and Vegeta * |
 Kittioto 1/1/02 . chapter 1Well, DUH! Of course it's Mirai Trunks to Vegeta. I knew that. Sure. Leers at people, daring them to challenge her Weeeeell, this was pretty good... rhthme is off in some spots, but that's coo with me. - Probably SUPPOSED to be like that... tralala. I SAW KATE & LEOPOLD. Leo reminds me of Piccolo... swoons Erk, anywho, great job! |
 Jesscheaux 12/12/01 . chapter 1*does a mock of Braidboy's * DUUUUUUUUUDE!
I loved your poem! It was very sweet and insightful. Sounds just like Trunks. I love Veggie! I really did enjoy this poem so keep up the good work! BTW, since your name is Braidboy's , does that mean that you're Duo Maxwell's
girlfriend? Just wondering. That's what I thought of when I saw your name. Ja ne! |
 o1 6/4/01 . chapter 1Whoa, that was really good! I loved it. _ |
 gisele winner 6/2/01 . chapter 1 I like this poem, but then again, i like everything that has to do with DBZ. |
 Nemie 6/2/01 . chapter 1 WOW! Just...WOW...I loved that! That was really well written and just...wow...and, um...yeah... |
 Nezumi 6/2/01 . chapter 1It was great *_* I love Mirai trunks! Its a very sweet poem.. _ *glomps it* |
 Vindali 6/2/01 . chapter 1I like it. Great job! |
 jterra 6/2/01 . chapter 1I really don't like reading poetry, but this was really very, very good! Good Job! |
 Rai-Chan 6/2/01 . chapter 1 Like? I LOVE it! This is one of the most touching poems I've eva read, and believe me, thats alot! I love writing poetry and reading others, and believe me, this has such great potential! You should try getting this or any of your other works published, believe me. It was great! |