 SleepingChaos 2007-05-10 . chapter 1Hahaha!! XD that was interesting- poor Fayt. *lol* |
 DarkNite109 2007-03-26 . chapter 1Awesome sexiness, but my favorite part was definitely the fact that Fayt's pants were made of multiple parts. |
 minceo 2006-08-16 . chapter 1cool i have no idea who the characters are but still good story and it is like the DNAngel one hehe i liked that one esicpply when Dark relised about Krads coat thingy |
 Mizuki hikari 2006-07-12 . chapter 1lol very interesting |
 Shima Ame 2006-07-07 . chapter 1Aw! It was cute, Albel's underwear scared me... But adding Nel's little thought made the fic all the better. While at first it seemed carnal, her little comment made it appearent that yes, they do love each other. And that's what counts! Great job! I guess I need to read your other one, now, don't I? |
 Moshi Moshi Mai 2006-07-06 . chapter 1LMAO. This was hilarious! I loved it, like seriously loved it. I was laughing all the way. Haha, Fayt's outfit sure is complicated! xD And Albel...sneaky, oh my gosh I was laughing so hard when Cliff exclaimed "Albel's a girl?" hahaha. Loved the ending! ~bows~
=Moshi Moshi Mai= |
 Miss Nox 2006-07-06 . chapter 1That was so great- I loved this story- I knew Albel would win! So great! |
 Zenphoenixa 2006-07-06 . chapter 1LOL! Oh, that brings back good old memories of poker days back in school! XD (Er... ordinary poker, that is. It was a Christian school, so no stripping on the playground. XD XD ) I'd know better than to play strip poker anyway, since my luck when it comes to cards or any sort of gambling for that matter, is supremely craptacular. O_o Hence why I don't dare step foot in a casino. XD Lol, Albel's got some guts playing against Fayt whose armour is so complicated that I swear it needs its own postcode. X_x XD This was a great little fic, and I was like "Whoa!" when Albel got a straight since I've never gotten a straight in a poker hand in my life, damn five card hand. *Shakes fist* Loving the ending too - poor Fayt, getting rid of that nine! XD But we all know that by the end of the night, they'll both be winners anyway, heh. ;) Excellent work hon! :D |
 Maiyoko Iwagashi 2006-07-05 . chapter 1;o
Oops... I was in my brother's account when I submitted that review... Gr I'm gonna hurt him if he doesn't stop signing into his account and not signing out X_X
Anyways, I just wanted to clear that up and let you know that my name is NOT DestructoDude, which I think is totally stupid beyond reason... >_<
Anyways, I liked your twin story for this fic...
And, I did the same review mistake for it, too,apperntly before I noticed it o.o
//whacks her head//
I'm such an idiot...
Once again, keep writing! I like it!
-Mai
See, I'M Maiyoko, not "DESTRUCTODUDE" ((dies from lame-ness)) |
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