HAHAHA. This is certainly amusing! And yes, i think you practically nailed every cliche nicely already. Maybe you missed out some Ron-bashing that seems to appear quite often. I have always thought Ron is a nice guy so its pretty shocking how 'evil' Ron appears to be in certain stories.

Good job!

-roxie-

my god that was funny :) very entertaining...

LMAO
V good :P

LMAO! That was the most RANDOMEST, crack-headed, Cliche Fic i have ever read! And i loved it! lol too Funny. But... really, including a ball is Cliche? I know it was never there but shite. Thats seriously kills some of my plans (totally ranting sorry). lol great ending. Maybe BOW could have one like it? :D

Haha! This was amazing as a complete mockery to everything that completely cheesy and clichéd Hermione/Draco's are! Next you should do Hermione/Snape xD I particularly liked the mentions of the "plot holes." Awesome!

This basically sums up all the bad HGDM stories out there... unfortunately for every good story there are 10 ones like this.
Congratulations, I was smirking the whole time while reading this:)

Hehe, so funny, and so true. My cheeks hurt :P

You could probably even change Mione's and Draco's names and replace them with Rose and Scorpius and you'd have their cliched fanfics XD (with some minor Death Eater/Dumbledore/friends names changes of course)

Awesome job!! you got all the cliches perfectly!!

lacking a better name

Wow, that was interesting.

bahahahahahahahah that was to too funny. mucho applause-o

Then, the Christmas ball that never happened in any of the books but always happened in fanfics well, happened.


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So true. Love this story. With all that sarcasm.

That was freakin hilarious. I can't believe I'd never read it before. Seriously... the funniest part is how I kept going 'Yep, read one of those. Oh, those too. Oh, yeah, yeah.' hehe. Great stuff. (Even worse... 'Hehe, I've written that!' Well, not THAT cliche... but I'm sure you get what I mean...)

? That was as Ron said "Brilliant but scary, you know that?"

Haa
Grape juice..
Nice reference :P
LJ

this story makes me laugh hard enough to fall out of my chair every time I read it. I think I've read at least 83.8502871243% of the Draco/Hermione fics on this site so I've read at least every one of these cliches 3 times.