I adore this. I'd love to find out what happens next. If you're still interested in this story, please think about updating. These five chapters are addicting.

OmgoshIloveyou. *hearts abound* You are brilliant. And I love you for writing this because it is awesome. Liek srsly. XD And I love Brain, Subconscious, and Instinct. (Lawl.)

Mucho huggles and luff

Woohoo! Update-eh! With a little fluff thrown in for the rabid fan-girls, such as myself. xD

I really loved this chapter, and especially loved the mental battle of Roxas's. That's always one of the most entertaining parts of a story... The mental battle of which has three sides or more. It's like... The Rofl Waffle Ninja Spiff Dance of Hobo Blaghenblurgleskurtch Worlds!

WHEE!

Plus, I love how this plot is progressing. If this were soup, it would be perhaps the best soup I've ever had.

Chuu!

You are the first, last, only, singular and solitary being in the history of this universe or any other to do a "love at first sight" scene that was convincible, non-gag-worthy, or, most importantly, actually entertaining. In fact, VERY entertaining. I bow to your superior mad writing skillz.

And the rest of the story is kickass too. Naturally. :P Very nice so far, much pity for both Roxas and Luxord, and moving on to the next chapter.

Yosh! Your story ROCKS! A little slow in the first few chapters but it's definately gotten interesting.

*Adds to alerts list.*

xD yay, you updated! This is so hilarious, I thought I was going to die when I was reading this from pent-up laughter. (staying up late is BAD) I love Roxas's subconscious. He should listen to it. *nods* And Axel with piercingsteh awesome. :3 Good job, please update again UBER soon!

Yay update

Yay! This fic was updated! Mm, I love it so much! Poor Luxord, all out of the loop...for now.

I can't wait to see the other Organization members! X3 It's going to be exciting! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, w3rd!

Wow, chapter left my jaw on the floor. I just love this story so much; the plot is brilliant and...it's just a great idea. I can't wait to see more of Roxas, Axel, and Luxord, and everyone else too, of course! :D

OMG! That was so awesome! Definitely the best chappie so far! Excellent work, mate! _*

Take care,

Belle

Squee! I can't wait for the next chapter! The last bit was definately mysterious! I love it! XD

(There better be more AkuRoku loving! Grr!) I also love how Roxas's subconscious keeps on arguing with him! Hehe! XD

Great plot! And the AU Axel and Roxas are so cool. Roxas is definitely a potty-mouth. XD Can't wait to read what happens next!

I've come over from thedancinglight on LJ and I'd like to say that I think this is rather brilliant. Your summary had me hooked and I love this idea. I'm excited to see how you plan on fleshing things out!

Update! Im like...really into this ficcy!

-is totally hooked- Oh my. This is the most fascinating plot EVAR. Seriously, I love how this is going, especially the humour in between (namely the description of Axel's hair in the second chappie). Keep it up!