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Hina-chan20
2008-07-21
ch 6,
abuseThere is, i's the leaders partner, Konan. She's a girl. And the leader is Pein-Pain-Pien, however the hell you spell it.
'Nyway, lovelovelove the story and continue!
Mew of Fire
2008-07-19
ch 6,
abusei wish you'd write more. this is a really good story.
FallTiger and Foxkilth
2008-07-14
ch 5,
abuseloving it please update soon it's killing me

~FallTiger~
Bianca
2008-07-10
ch 6, anon.
abusehey, i wanted to say that i read this like 5 times already. i really like it and was wondering if you could finish this story. i think that it is really good. it's very interesting and enjoyable to read.

P.S. please update soon. if u need any ideas i would gladly help out. i give ideas out all the time. i have no problem helping out. i hope u are not offended by that most people are anyway, you can reply at my email address anytime you want. PEACE!
UchihaKiwayo
2008-06-24
ch 6, anon.
abusepally pally update please. the story is much to interesting to just b abruptly cut off at the climax, i love the whole idea. very original i think?i really dont kno, im a newbie... yay. ilSS!
Diamond1984
2008-06-18
ch 6,
abuseThat's pretty good. What happened next? I want to read more.
mysteriousgirl8395
2008-06-12
ch 6,
abusethat was Cool man, I can't wait till the next chapter !
please don't stop writting
NatsumexRyomaxSasuke
2008-06-07
ch 6,
abuseLovEd iT, SUPPERR!

PLeAse UpDaTE sOoN...

YUO'RE STORY ROCKS!
Uchiha Sayaka
2008-06-02
ch 6,
abusenice. very interesting. i bet sasukes really thinking about what sakura said to him before. i hope i die on the mission and id rather be with itachi. ha! sucks for him
cutecrazyice
2008-05-30
ch 6,
abuseIt's weird that I'm happy that Sakura and Ino got kidnapped...b yeah, I'm glad. In fact, i'm gleeful! Take that, Sasuke! I really, really hate Takara here, she is such a **. Oh, I hope everybody soon finds out that the baby isn't Sasuke's. And Takara better not hurt Sakura in any way!

Well, hope you write more soon. Nice fic! :)
ApplelovesApple
2008-05-10
ch 6,
abuseupdate soon


love sasuke and sakura:D

and ino and shika:D

sorry i no the other girls are your but hate them lol
PiecesHateScorpios
2008-05-09
ch 6,
abuseI LOVE THE STORY! but... YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED SINCE AUGUST! 2 YEARS AGO!! *cries* plz update soon!
geez... I hate Miyu and Takara. with a burning passion. lol!
and lets all say thank you to Keiji! without him, Sasuke and Shika-kun would be married to those **.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
PHS
suka uchiha
2008-05-07
ch 6,
abuseGREAT CHAPTER!=)

UPDATE SOON!
Black Rose-hime101
2008-05-06
ch 6,
abuseTHIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!

Takura and Miyu are **
Sasuke and Shikamaru are acting like bastards
When will it ever end?

Anyways update please!^^
Funabisenu
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseisn't Konoha Village Hidden In the Trees/Leaves?
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