Lots of action in this chapter!

‘They’re in love,’ she grinned. ‘A girl from Montana in love with a Messer. That’s gonna end in trouble,’ she muttered.

Great line! I'm enjoying this story so far.

Hi! Just thought I'd review and say "I LOVE THIS STORY!" :D
And no grammar mistakes or 'will not' instead of 'won't'. I hate it when they do that. It's like they actually think that people talk like that. Like my english coursework. I had to re-do it all because I had to make it even longer by changing won't to will not's etc. Okay. I'm babbling now. Oh well.
Love the notes as well. Makes me believe there's someone as mental as me(No offense intended. I just compare all my friends mental stabilities to mine. Mine's always teetering on the edge of 'send for an ambulance while I put her in a straight jacket then we'll cart her off to the loony bin'. Told you I babble:P lol!) Anyways. Back to the review. I love your story and the characters, especially Stephanie. She seems fascinating and exciting. LOL. I really must sound mental. I can't wait to read more of your stories, if you have any that is. Oh, I almost forgot, I totally agree with you on the whole Flack/Danny thing. They are so yummy. I mean Flack's eyes, they are just like so gorgeous. But I prefer Danny. My whole family and some of my friends know I like him (Understatement!) so they tease me senseless when CSI NY's on. Mainly cos I know exactly what time it's on and they finf it hilarious that I like someone. I swear they think I'm an alien. But my dad, being the clever guy that he is (most of the time. The rest of the time he's a big kid.), figured out exactly why I like him. Okay I'm gonna shut up now cos I must sound really wierd to be talking about my personal life to a complete stranger. Oh well. Can't wait to read any other stories you write/have written. Jeez. Didn't realise I'd written that much. Whoops. Teehee. :D Bye love Amy. x

Hey!
Great story, Loved how you rounded it out - it was emotional and well-thought out, but it wasn't cheesy. Really a great read, a great case, fun to follow... congrats on a great first fic! :)

heya! love the epil. :) hope for your future works! ;p I know you love reviews(who wouldnt?) so I too appreciate your reply!

-mj(wgf)

awesome ending! That was very moving and very well written!

I really enjoyed it very well writen!

Oh wow! great ending! i loved it! well done!

I've enjoyed it, thanks for the review replies :)

Aw I loved it so much!

hey josie nice work..:) hopibng for that epilogue!

-mj(wgf)

I like it :) thanks for writing

Great story!

great update!

Oh wow! that was fantasic! well done!