Thanks for letting me inside Sadaharu's head. Sometimes I like it that a story is action-driven. Sometimes you don't need action in a story; it just is. And it's good, the way this story is.

Thank you so much for sharing.

So sweet

Wow, the mood of this story is really... intense, I'm thinking, but that's not quite it. The whole setting is just a regular morning run, but you somehow write it into such a beautifully alive story, I loved it. I also adore how there's an undeniable but quite subtle undercurrent of InuixKaidoh there, it's adorable. Awesome story, I really, really, liked it.

Unique perspective and you touched on some things I've been thinking about as well, like what happens when they all go to high school. I really enjoyed your fic! ^_^