Oh man... this is better than comedy central!

D.C.: aw.. poor kite... the pie... not the pie...
Peon: I'd Go back and shoot me a chocobo.
D.C.: hm... fried chocobo... blahg.

I love this! lOl. that does hurt. my cousins fell on me when we were on a trip to mexico. xD OH NO! THE DESSERTS AND BEER R GONE! xD lol. ew... yuffie. lol...

well good job! update it soonish!

-Alexa xD

Hey, I'm Kovar, a friend of LT! He recommended the story to me and it's awesome! I'd also like to summit my OC, if you don't mind.

Name: Ren
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Hair: Spiked a little like Clouds and Sora's, dark blue
Eyes: Green with a hint of blue
Personality: Laid back and calm. He likes video games, especially DDR.
Clothing: Black pants with a white shirt, black unzipped jacket with sleeves cut short, black shoes.
Likes: DDR, Fighting, Girls, hanging with friends
Dislikes: Gay people, boredom, heartless
Favorite Food: Pizza, Ice Cream, Steak, Candy
Least Fave. Foods: Sour Stuff, Vegetables
Theme Song: Through the Fire and Flames by Dragonforce

Another thing, he's one of Taron's friends, and should appear near Memory Skyscraper...or anywhere you want, I don't care.

LOL... oh crap, we;re dead... sigh oh wat ever will we do? lol yay Marl is going to be attacked by the moogle and chocobo! can I ask you something? did you get the moogle and chocobo from FFVII? I'm playing it and yeah its an attack... did you? if you did awesome! but anyways! update soonish! you been late on updating, but no worries! I dont mind waiting! update!

-Alexa S. Perez!

or BlackRose2009 xD

*Has fallen out of chair laughing so hard* OMFG that is hilarious! Thanks for finally updating!-hugs and gives cakes-

Marly got ownzd! lol! wait a sec...Marlys eyes are blue, but the green really plays on his eyes.

-Is still in the background cracking up, I cant help it its too funny!-

Can't wait... he he he...

And I think there should be another note. Taron's name is now Tasogare, which is twilight in japanese, and his wing is also black and white. Otherwise, he's the same.

Hahahaha, this never fails to amuse me. XD

Finally updated, did you? ^^ I'm glad - and I can't wait for the next chapter~!

Oh plz tell me youll wrk on this 1 again! Please?

I really love your work, I just wish you would connect them all together into one mega story that way you dont leave a good story unfinished.


Name: Seraph
Age: 17
Female

Appearence: Midsized, catnoid(half human half cat) But hair and white cat ears, tail, and blue cat eyes. Wearing a Black mini skirt, red legings, a black sleeveles top with a blue heart on it saying Kingdom Hearts stole my heart, a dead cat purse. Dead purple lipstick and killer boots. Fingerless gloves

Likes: Rabbits and Cats, anime, manga, youtube, killing folk with a giant sword. Raw food, Milk, Glomping Kadaj

Dislikes: Cooked food, raw meat, people always trying to touch her ears, or stepping on her tail.

It looks like you need some more Male OC's.

WHAT?--Ixivio O.o

Muahahahahahhahahahahaha!

Name: Ixivio Darkrain
Age: technically 17
Gender: Male
Hair Style/Color: Spikey sorta a cross between Sora's and Roxas' hair. It can be either bubblegum pink or ANY Shade of blue Your choice I'm making him dye it.

Hey!--Ixivio protests
Pink looks so wrong on you... Say maybe I should leave it pink..
just to torment you. Anyways back to the info...

Eye color: Midnight blue almost black.

Personality: Cynical, But he has a sense of humor and is devious. But is good in his own way. Resents being a clone of Sora but has gotten over it.

Clothing of choice: Black shirt W/ blue lightning. Black pants, Black nikes and ocassionally wears the Organization Cloak but if he does he usually leaves it unzipped/ buttoned (whatever those things have.)

Likes: New Ideas, Candy, his camera phone,video games,Anime (Trinity Blood Rulez!--Ixivio.), and Manga (Tsubasa Chronicles!)

Dislikes: Tolerates Both Axel & Demyx. Really hates pricks, and stuck up b-, & not being able to teleport.

Favorite food: most chinese, and Tacos (Except Taco Bell)

Least favorite Food: Anything diet, Taco bell, and cafeteria food (Hates it with an upmost passion.)

Theme song(s):"In The End" by Linkin Park And "It's my Life" By Bon Jovi

Meeting place:

Peferably in Deep Dive City ANYWHERE there.

Or in the very least in Travese or Twighlight town.

Additional info: Is a clone created by Vexen. However he does have his own heart, and what few memories he's had in his life.
He is Extremly smart with an IQ of like 594 but he doesn't always ues the knowlege in his head! It give him headaches, So it's kept in a little mental box in the back of his mind.

P.S. I love the story! Update as soon as you can! Takes the box out of Ixivio's head and runs.
Hey! Give that back!--Ixivio runs after D.C.

Man this is great! Poor Kite and Co. Cid is going to get them killed sometime. Poor Moogle has a knife and no one to stab with it.

Also, could I submit an OC?

Name: Cyro Haril
Age: 16

Gender: Male

Hair Style/Color: Chocolate brown hair gelled up with a few strands hanging in his face. The back is all ruffled and cut short but it does get longer as it goes closer to the top of his head. Normally he wears a black hat backwards on his head.

Eye Color: A dark colored orange

Personality: Always a happy, hyper character. He is kind of lazy when it comes to work but other than that Cyro just loves hanging out with his friends. He speaks with somewhat of an accent, never ending sentances ending in "-ing" correctly, just forgetting the "g" part. Cyro loves to joke around verbally, never one to actually join in with a prank unless it was revenge for something pulled on him. Strangly enough he seems to always sit in a chair sideways with his head resting against the armrest. All in all, a hyper happy teen with a mind for joking and hanging out.

Ex of Speach: "Hell yeah! Postin' posters and hangin' out with friends! Who wouldn't like it? Not meh that's for sure!"

Clothing Of Choice: His style of clothing isn't something you find in an everyday magazine. Cyro is normally wearing a black dress shirt with flames on the bottom left unbuttoned with a white tank-top underneath. On the bottom part of his body are camoflauge shorts reaching just a bit below the knee. A black hat sits on his head backwards, covering most of his hair with just the few stands of bangs hanging out. There's always headphones around his neck.

Likes: Hangin' out, Punk music, Jokin' around, A comfy couch or chair

Dislikes: Being confused, Pranks, Moogles, Chocobos, Smelly things

Favorite Food: Chocolate ice cream, Marshmallows, Cherries, Hotdogs, CornDogs, Brownies

Least Favorite Food: Anything healthy and not covered in sugar

Theme Song: "The Anthem" by Good Charlotte

Where Do You Want Character To Meet With The Others:

Choices:

FF Park

Additional Info: He gets confused easily and without much effort.

*hits self*

Can I redo my profile thingy? I just realize I didn't finish it...

I'm sorry! *dodges bricks* You can have brownies, for compensation, I guess... *holds out plate*

Name: Orinda Tempestt (Fire Serpent)

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Hair Style/Color: Generally kept loose, mid-way down her back, it's silver with midnight blue streaks (nine of them - four on each side, one down the middle of her hair)

Eye Color: Grey-green (blind)

Personality: She is very tempermental but likes to have fun.

Clothing Of Choice: Tank top and cargo pants. Colors are usually grey or dull green. Occasionally, she'll wear faded red, but very rarely does she ever.

Likes: Solarsurfing (like windsurfing, but... *sigh* It's hard to explain - if you've seen Treasure Planet, you'll know, but go google it if you don't... ^_^), DDR (even though she can't see, she can feel the beat and knows where to step)

Dislikes: People who make her angry, Kadaj (he left her when they were younger...long story...), the sun,

Favorite Food: PASTA! Kitsune udon, blackberries

Least Favorite Food: Chocolate's the only one, really...she just generally dislikes desserts.

Theme Song: “Dirty Little Secret” By All-American-Rejects *nodnod* It fits her well.

Where Do You Want Character To Meet With The Others?

Traverse Town (Third District)

Additional Info: Again, has one hell of a temper and can "see" with her other senses, rather than her eyes. Her hearing is better than a normal person's, which lets her know when someone's around. She can also feel the vibrations with her body, which let her know what's happening. So even if she can't see what's going on, she can feel what's going on.

Bye~! An I PROMISE I won't be annoying anymore! You can brick me if I do!

dood. this is awesome. keep it up. also heres some oc's.
names: Jax and David Serres.
ages: Jax-15 David-15
genders: Jax-male David-male
hair styles: Jax-Long blonde hair with streaks of silver. David- brown in a crew cut.
eye colors: Jax-dark blue. David-light blue
personalities: Jax-likes to do nothing or play on his DS. David- likes to destroy things.
clothing: Jax-Organization robe. David-Army style.
likes:Jax-Sleeping, his DS. David-throwing random things at people.
dislikes:Jax-people who disturb him. David-Jax.
favorite food: Jax-Moltengelli. David-Pizza.
least favorite food: Jax and David-Brussels Sprouts.
theme song: Both-NONE!
meeted: Narshe(FFI/VI) or castle oblivion.
Ghost Bastion
P.S. GUNBLADES RULE!
P.P.S. SETZER RULES!
P.P.P.S. GHOSTS ARE REAL!
P.P.P.P.S. MOLTENGELLI!

Cool chappie, update soon or the moogle will make you.