I love it! =) It's so sweet and ...kawaii! >.< and you're right, there should be more poems for them! *^.^*

There aren't many YT at all fics or poems. This was really cute

Great poem! I love the YahikoxTsubame pairing, they're my favorite couple. Nice, short, and sweet. Thanks.

great poem! its so cute, and i think it really brings out the essence of the yahiko x tsubame relationship...they're my favorite RK couple

Hee. Cute. Good ending. Yes, it was quite clear, although more from the summary and foreword than the poem itself. I mean, who else could it be? :D

cute. AndI'm glad you did a Yahiko/Tsubame.

-KS