It's a good story, but I have a complaint. It's just a basic grammer rule, but generally, when one skips down two lines and starts typing again, it's viewed as a new paragraph. The dashes before every line are superfluous and annoying. You should edit them out.

XD that was pretty much just about the most hilarious thing ever...I was just telling myself I needed to go read something humorous...and here it is! Hallelujah! XD *tries to picture albel as a waiter and ends up rolling on the floor cackling*
Albel: -_- shut up...it's not that funny...SHUT UP BEFORE I CUT OUT YOUR TONGUE!
0_o err...yeah...I wonder why Albel needed extra money...but whatever it was for...good thing he was there. XD nobody forces people to take something icky better than albel...they better take it if they don't want to die. XDD omfg, Albel's driving a car! Could be bad news for fayt if Albel decides to play mailbox bowling. XDD lol...you need to make another one kinda like this...at least something hilarious like this! ^^

i love this story!
update soon!
i cant wait to see what happens.

-evilgoddess1990 loves ya

LOL. "Take the ** cheese!" XD XD XD How can we say no to that, honestly. Albel's just full of waiter charm. O_o; XD This reminded me of a Mr Bean episode where he got served this horrible raw meat dish in a restaurant, and was stuffing it in his sugar bowl, under his plate, a woman's hand bag etc. and yes, a flower vase was involved too! XD (And screwing the flowers back in place after it was done. XD ) Fayt getting totally whacked and stabbing his soda was delightful crack imagery, though it's a pity he's not going to remember much of what Albel plans on doing to him, LOL. Great work, I'm glad you've decided to start a series of funny drabbles like this! :D

lol ... continue

Aw... I wanna snuggle now... Silly Albel! You should write another chapter! You should! Albel takes the extra money and... gets Fayt a gift! Or takes him to that tavern to eat because he gets a discount! x3 yep

You know, oddly enough, it was only AFTER my review on strip-poker that I took the time to look at your penname (I don't usually do that, but in order to get to your profile, I had to). Small world, isn't it n_n I suppose I own you a good dozen reviews xD

XD Omg, I laughed soo much! This was hellah hilarious! Drunken Fayt, priceless! Ugh, I don't like cheese, and everyone are always handing it to me.

Some dude; "Here is the cheese. Take."
Aero: "No!" *slow motion*

;D Write more, me wanna read!

*trying not to choke on her drink* Cheese! Albel serving out CHEESE of all things! And horrible cheese at that! Nice..!

Hahah, very cute! :D Update soon! :D

=Moshi Moshi Mai=