Seriously good start to a sci-fi here. And Leo's thoughts, are they nothing, or something quite sinister? The glowy orb, alien in nature? A very small spaceship perhaps? I can't wait to find out. Please, continue!

-Gwen

You can't stop there.

I can't wait to read what happens next. Hope you post the next chapter soon!!

I've always been a sucker for Donnie, and that's how this story grabbed my attention. I do hope you update it soon. I'm very curious to see what has happened to Don, as well as what that sphere and black creature is. Excellent job so far.

And, there it is, the end of the ride, so far.

*rein stares at the PC screen and mumbles incoherantly to herself - "But, but, it CAN'T end THERE! Gotta be more to read" She tries the down arrow on the chapter advance button, but chapter 4 (and 5 and 6 and 7 and,.,) is missing. She suddenly feels the beginnings of a soft sob slip free, as her bottom lip pouts just a little, "S'not fair".*

Well, now that THAT'S done with, when're ya gonna update? Okay, okay, life happens, real stuff's more important, but - um - me can only hope you have plans for this beauty. Love it love it love it and I'm so very glad that Ramica discovered this little gem and coughnominateditcough in the coughfanficcoughcompcough.

Gotta be exnaycareful what you xnaysay here.

In any event, if ever you get a thought or two 'bout this baby, don't hesitate to jot it down, 'kay? Yep, would like that very, very much.

At the very least, I wanna know where the bottomless freezer leads to. :0)

Great job, once again, and I would dearly love to know from where you honed your writing skills!

Be blessed,
Rene'

Oh, you evil authoress! You've ensnared my favorite turtle, Donnie. You've put him in a perilous, pain-filled, and ponderous predicament.

I'm hooked, terribly and torturously hooked. No escape, other than to continue reading, regardless of what trials you have in store for my Don-san. GAH...

Okay, this is only a story, rein, you must repeat this phrase and as often as necessary through out the reading - It Is Only A Story.,.

And one that has me bound tight to its author's will, no less.

I am doomed.

Great job! Again, you add little sprinkles of wit and interest with everyday stuff. Or just simple comments such as Leo's amused, "Mikey will never grow up". LOL

But what you're doing to Don - well - we'll just have to see about that, no?

Yes!

Be blessed,
Rene'

Brilliantly executed. Wonderfully worded. Loved the little bits of humor sprinkled throughout, kind of like granite flecked with mica and like granite, this is a solid bit of writing. Nicely done.

The way you segue from beginning to end, adding a mentioned forethought, such as peanut butter, to tie it all together. Me likes.

However, I thought the doberman pinchers were a bit abrupt. Only a little, though, and yet it would seem that our purple-banded hero was a bit distracted with his thoughts for him to miss that 'finer' detail of junk-yard rummaging.

Always assume 'dogs'. LOL

Anyway, I saw this story as a nomination for the 2006 FanFic Comps and based on your profile, decided to take a test drive.

As you can tell, I love it. Not sure where you're going to take me, but I'll just sit back and watch the scenery from the back seat.

Be blessed,
Rene'

wow cliffy keep on writing

I cant wait till the next chapter!

Hm... How come I've totally missed this story? *scratches head* Maybe 'cause I've been away for some time and it was a while since you updated last time...? Oh anyway, I hope you update soon. This is exciting!

Idun

*giggles with delight* Oh this story is so good! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!! ^_^

good writing! excellent composition. you have a great story going here, i will gleefully follow your very creative imagination to see where it goes.thank you.

I loved it.

This. Is. AMAZING!

okay, now I'm confused, what on earth WAS that thing? it killed the two dogs and the guard? poor sap, he didn't even see it coming... and Donny? waky waky, you cant stay asleep all day!

so, uh, Leo and the gang are down the rabbit hole with no idea where theyr'e going, or what's abotu to happen? did they try to get the sphere thing off Don's hands, or is it fixed and un-ditachable? man, this is getting complicated...