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| Inspector Marth 2006-07-09 ch 1,  | abusehey pretty good, is this a one shot or r u countinue, its intresting, poor Link. -inspector Martholimule |
| awylder 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was an interesting short piece expressing Link's feelings of being overlooked on decisions. Perhaps there needs to be a chain of command so feelings are not hurt. Your spelling is getting better(only mistake was arena). The grammar was much improved over your other stories as well. As always, keep up the good work Niyanna. |
| Dormantly banjkazfan 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abusePoor Link...he's one of the strongest smashers, but it sounds like he's hurting inside ((boy, ain't I smart?)) Excellent one-shot. |
| crystalicios 2006-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... I read... but for once I have nothing to say... Which is weird. This is a first for me, because usually I HAVE something to say... and now I dont ^_^ So I guess this is a worthless review... heh... sorry. |