Love it!

this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account.

this was a great story.

I figured I would do one over-all review so I don't singlehandedly overrun your inbox. I liked the story overall but some of the transitions were poorly done. There were several instances when one scene suddenly became another and I found myself having to re-read bits to get a handle on what was going on.

I really liked that poem at the end. Is that an original piece or did you find it somewhere?

Peace,

-Kobez-

I liked your story and I can't wait to read the sequel. The poem at the end was fantastic, by the way.

this was a great story off now to read your squeal.

Over all a very good story.

it was an awsome story! i enjoyed reading it! i am happy to read the sequal! thank you for writing!

Loved the fic! Off to read the sequel!

How could people use any Other villan other than Lex Luther? Yes, he IS most used, but that's what we love(Or hate, you chose) about him! Any one who is sick of him is retarded. YES! I SAID IT!

Okay, okay... I'm submitting a review... :)

I apologize that I hadn't read this story until now. I had been meaning to for a long time, and I can't even say that I was avoiding it for fear of copying anything (as you mentioned a few times in your author's notes). Just somehow didn't. Forgive?

Anyway, I did enjoy the story, and I'm looking forward to going on to your sequel. What I hope for in the next one (though I know it's too late to request anything, since you have already written quite a lot of it), is for Lois and Clark to really share their lives completely. And of course for them to be able to be together as Lois and Clark, not Lois and Superman. But there are a lot of obstacles to overcome, so I expect it won't be easy!

Good luck in further writing endeavors. :)

He, first of all, a very good story.

I especially liked that you gave Richard a good farewell.

And for your deciscion not writing about Lex Luthor.

I think it did well for your story.

So thanks.

have A nice day

that was the last chap? damn!

Yay! I loved your story! I love the ending. It was cute!

come to think of it, I don't think I ever heard Jason call Superman 'daddy.' xD maybe I missed something.

I loved the ending! It was perfect, with the poem. Great work!

Very good story. Just finished reading it. Looking forward to more in the sequal.

Your story was great! I don't think I could name any specific chapter I liked the most, or a quote, because the story, as a whole, is magnificent as it is! I'll be moving on to the sequel now! :D