WOW! first funny but now it became angst! NICE STORY! is he dead? hope not!

*A* So confusing, and so cool at the same time!

...maybe that's cuz I need to go back and read everything from the beginning. 8D; My memory sucks.

D: They DIED. How could they DIE?!?!1

But they called Marly queer. >( *pets Marly*

Fix your computer quickly and update already your loyal fans want to know what happens next!

...You are the master at this. I bow down with Ixivio.

What? Why should I bow?--Ixivio

Because I said so!

...Gives me the death glare.

At least pay your respects for Rahzelia!

May she find peace in the Afterlife?--He bows his head.

Say weren't you in the process of being burned to a crisp?

OH Yeah...

love the story Update soon!

King Mickey: That is so sad...:(
I can't believe this is really happening...this isn't funny at all! This is more of a tragedy than being humurous I can't believe it's actually ending this way...this isn't funny at all! That's all I can say!

(Then Captain Pete comes marching on in)

Captain Pete: I'm so glad it's ending like this...HA! HA!
I'm so glad that the Bad Guys are finally winning for once!
And besides...Humor is just plain stupid anyways...TRAGEDIES ROCK! IT'S TIME TO DIE YOUR MAJESTY...(Pulls out his giant silver anchor)

King Mickey: Pete...I won't let you get away with all of this...you monster...you are the one responsible for turning this funny story upsidedown! (Pulls out his little golden keybalde)

Pete: Oh well, little boat boy king...I made sure that everything would end in a tragedy...that's how it goes...

King Mickey: I HATE YOU PETE! I SWEAR, THIS WAS SUPPOSED TO BE FUNNY AND YOU RUINED IT! YOU *^^$#@%!

Pete: There is nothing you can do your majesty because...SHE'S DEAD! >:O

(and so King Mickey of Disney Castle and Captain Pete of the Steamboats from Timeless River clash for the final time.)

One winner...one loser...

King Mickey 007: Stay tune...as I...007, the King's Body Guard and Spy, witness the final champion and who will triumph as the victor...I'm on the edge of my seat right now...:(
Time to end this Humor-Trajedy once and for all!

Taron: Welcome back! Did you miss us?

It's good to see you typing again. We all missed you. Right guys?

*A HUGE audience is behind me. They all chear once you notice them.*

And the chapter is mind-blowing... Have you improved?

Cool chappie and update the bending reality

Question! does this means that chapter 19 is the end of the story?! No...

Oh thank goodness. I didn't think you were going to update. Glad you got your computer fixed. I'm trying to figure out mine currently. Keep up the great work!

~the White Raven

Fi..nally...got my ...computer fixed...and ...finally...caught...up...
ulph!(coughs blood and dies)

In a quote you said..."I’m starting a mailing thingy, cause after school starts, I don’t know when I’ll update. So if you want to be on it. Tell me in your review! Later!

Next Chapter: Death Mix

I would like to be on your mailing thingy please!
Please thank you!

Take care Now

King Mickey 007 Signing off... Oh and very interesting even though this chapter was more tragic than humor. :'(

awesome chappy. like rahzzy, seal on memories, wish i could do that on my dad lol. seeya

okay, the reason why I couldn't read you fic. is BECAUSE MY DAMN COMPUTER BROKE! ...so you see, my computer isn't fixed yet. I'm using my friend's computer so this is the only chapter I can read. But anywho, WOWW...you put Reno and Rude in it too? That's amazing.

That girl is brave!

Very interesting chapter! i feel sorry for poor Sai. He;s been through so much lately and now all this! And what's a mialing thiny?