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| Thymine 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, woah. Love the style you used here -- very simple but effective. Really like the idea of John been there at the end of the Pilot as well. Very nice insight into Daddy!Winchester's head -- I'm not a big fan of his, but I loved this. |
| Regretful 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseO so pretty. |
| pizzapixie 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseDeep, thought provoking and a glimpse inside Pap's head. Well done. Thanks. |
| Cherrystone 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! And that last line just summed it up perfectly. |
| Ghostwriter 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. Cool. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| JaggerK 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abusevery good. |
| wild wolf free17 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuse"— as he watches, sam wraps his arms around the pretty blonde, holds her close, makes her laugh—" -- shouldn't 'sam' be capitalized? I'm sure you're tired of being told how good your stories are. Doesn't matter--they still are. |