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Reviews For: The Short Straw

Monochromatic Pylon
2006-08-16
ch 1,
abuseAh, SMUT Alphia... haven't read that for a while >.<

I still have several chapter to catch up on 'So, You Hate Me?', but it always nice to read Alphia lemon.
keeki
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abuseAlbel + Sophia + smutty fic = love

'nuff said
mycookienotyours
2006-07-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was an epic tale of beautiful romance. Well, not really epic, but I thought it was awesome!
Statik
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseThis was amazingly great. Two thumbs up!
ThrogmortenMimic
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseYay! Its good to see more Alphia from you. I liked this, there haven't been any lemons for a while for Alphia. Well, at least one isn't too far away in my story. But i hope too see more alphia from you. I still have to catch up on your other one... Sheesh, im so behind...
Fallacy
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseAh...nothing like a bit 'o Alphia SMUT. X3 Keep it up! Your Alphias are great!

And don't worry...I'm only slightly scarred by the AlFayt mention. -_- No permanent damage!!
Randomboulder
2006-07-06
ch 1,
abuse*Eyes popping*

Wow, that was a fast change from 'keep your eyes off me' to 'you're mine'. XD

I have to agree with the previous reviewer on hurray for writer's block, this once. XD
catesy
2006-07-06
ch 1,
abuseWow thank goodness for writers block! Not that I don't want you to update your other Alphia but this was really good. The idea of drawing straws was a nice touch.
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