Everyone was OOC. Amy is not suicidal, nor would she be if Sonic went all batshit on her. Another thing, Sonic is not that mean nor is he an angry person (hedgehog). He wouldn't lose his temper over her; I'm not even sure he has one for anyone other than Eggy. They're still friends. Shadow was OOC, but I suppose he has to be for this pairing.

You do have potential, though, and I'm anxious to see where you will take it. Maybe get a beta to help?

it was great short but great.

Hi! Nice one and Sonic can die for all I care! Seriously I want him to die! Shadow can be the new hero if (and when) Sonic dies.

lol yea I thought on that last senence. It's gonna be a long way down. XD

Great chapter! Sonic better shape up, but I guess it's too late for that. Shadow's got his ruby red eyes on Amy now. :)

that was great!I'm am so expecting to see the rest of the chapters!please write more!PLEASE!

I don't care, that was beautiful!

aww it's adorable!! :)

This story was cute! There was a bit too much of Sonic & Amy rather than Shadow & Amy, but that's ok, it's all about Amy. :)

Favourites Story :D

-SDR

if this is a one short good job if it isnt go on

Darn. i lvoed it! you shoulda made it longer with some jealousy scenes with sonic >,< that woulda been funni~

AW shadow's such a sweetheart!! Nice job! This is going on my favorites!

Amy:Shadow wuvs me!! *Puppy eyes*
Me:HES MINE! * Eats her * >_

swt swt

Good story!