 Electric Azure 2009-09-07 . chapter 1 Everyone was OOC. Amy is not suicidal, nor would she be if Sonic went all batshit on her. Another thing, Sonic is not that mean nor is he an angry person (hedgehog). He wouldn't lose his temper over her; I'm not even sure he has one for anyone other than Eggy. They're still friends. Shadow was OOC, but I suppose he has to be for this pairing.
You do have potential, though, and I'm anxious to see where you will take it. Maybe get a beta to help? |
 Nany 2009-05-05 . chapter 1 it was great short but great. |
 shadow fan 2009-01-19 . chapter 1 Hi! Nice one and Sonic can die for all I care! Seriously I want him to die! Shadow can be the new hero if (and when) Sonic dies. |
 Aiko110 2007-12-21 . chapter 1lol yea I thought on that last senence. It's gonna be a long way down. XD |
 goodie2shoes 2007-12-10 . chapter 1 Great chapter! Sonic better shape up, but I guess it's too late for that. Shadow's got his ruby red eyes on Amy now. :) |
 Nicole 2007-11-20 . chapter 1 that was great!I'm am so expecting to see the rest of the chapters!please write more!PLEASE! |
 Guardian of Balance 2007-10-02 . chapter 1I don't care, that was beautiful! |
 Chaobaby95 2007-08-27 . chapter 1aww it's adorable!! :) |
 Serenitee 2007-07-21 . chapter 1This story was cute! There was a bit too much of Sonic & Amy rather than Shadow & Amy, but that's ok, it's all about Amy. :)
Favourites Story :D
-SDR |
 kristen 2007-04-07 . chapter 1 if this is a one short good job if it isnt go on |
 fanfic nerd 2007-03-27 . chapter 1 Darn. i lvoed it! you shoulda made it longer with some jealousy scenes with sonic >,< that woulda been funni~ |
 MASTA125 2007-03-17 . chapter 1AW shadow's such a sweetheart!! Nice job! This is going on my favorites! |
 Shadowsgirlfriend4ever 2007-01-26 . chapter 1 Amy:Shadow wuvs me!! *Puppy eyes*
Me:HES MINE! * Eats her * >_ |
 eva 2007-01-16 . chapter 1 swt swt |
 Nighttime Lunacy 2006-12-24 . chapter 1Good story! |