 TheFifthCharmedOne 2008-11-10 . chapter 1nyah!! I'm really starting to fear fluffy moments. trust me, if you read over a hundred fanfics in one weekend like I just did, you would too. Great Story! There could have been a little more fluff though... NYAH! DAMN IT! |
 The blind palm reader 2006-09-09 . chapter 1dude!
trhat was awesome! |
 animaluver 2006-07-28 . chapter 1You're ending was well written, if I must say so. Only a few mistakes. Fix 'em and you'll have a perfect fanfic. |
 Ryshia 2006-07-12 . chapter 1This was the most awesome oneshot I've ever read!! OOC? Give me a break. That was the closest I've ever read for Danny Phantom. On the downside, there were some grammar errors. *shrug* They don't matter that much though. Keep the Danny Phantom fanfics coming!! |
 cutereviewgirl 2006-07-07 . chapter 1aw tat was cute... but i didn't getteh last line... she alwayz did notice him... but w/e i liked it :)
-CUTIE |
 Invader Johnny 2006-07-07 . chapter 1Your kidding me right? you ACTUALLY thought this was OOC?
Heh, well it's kinda hard to say my exact POV on the fic so I'll just tell ya that I haven't quite read a SxD fic like this one and I give ya two thumps up for writting it and posting it.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 koryana 2006-07-07 . chapter 1OMG! I LOVE IT!!
I LOVE THE STORY, EVERYTHING!
awesome job!! keep it up!!
=)
koryana |
 anime09 2006-07-06 . chapter 1BEAUTIFUL! |
 Knowledge in the Hollow Noggin 2006-07-06 . chapter 1IMPROVE? HOw?! i loved this, it was... uh-MAZE-ing! great jorb, well written, great plot. And besides the slight grammatical errors i think i saw, it was perfect...
no lies.. Dead serious.
wonderful!
KUDOS! |
 Paine394 2006-07-06 . chapter 1*Clap*
That was so cute!! Great story! |
 divalady963 2006-07-06 . chapter 1Brilliant. This was completely excellant. I loved everything. The length was great, and so was the grammar. The ideas and dialogue were phenomenal! Great job! |
 NeverLand5 2006-07-06 . chapter 1How Cute! I absalutely loved it!! You should write more of these things they're awsome. I loved it! |
 Paradigm08 2006-07-06 . chapter 1 Aw! This was an amazing oneshot if I say so myself! This is my first time reading a Danny Phantom fic and well...you just made me interested in reading more.
WHAT OOC-NESS?! Are you crazy? You nailed their personalities perfectly.
A story well executed.
Good job~
Can't wait for anymore stories if you are interested in writing more. |
 Snow-Leopard-Patronus 2006-07-06 . chapter 1I thought this was really cute! Very nice work!
Sunny724:) |
 teddygeiger'sinsanecrazyluver 2006-07-06 . chapter 1aaw! i love it! |