Excellent buildup, not too long winded, sometimes the author feels the need to describe every thought and emotion of the characters and by doing so they hinder the what would otherwise be a great story. But yours had great momentum, beautiful in it's simplicity

This is extremely sexy! I don't know where people get these ideas. O_o

HAHA! I liked the beginning where he was getting spanked! HAHA! Funny!

--SAYURI--

DAMN THAT WAS HOT! Love the submitive Mugen!

oH this was aay hot it left me wanting more...

good fic

This was freakin' HOT. Just so you know.

Just love spanking fics!!

Is there really such a tradition? This is funny!

wow
loved it