Hey,

This is a great story. I always look to see if you have updated. By the way, you have to finish the story. I have to know what happens to Joe with the gang and Frank and Isabella!

Excellent cliffie, didn't see that coming! I mean I thought she was in the gang, but dating one? Cool!

Honestly? I kind of expected it - slightly forshadowed. NEvermind; It's good. You're on my alert; update soonp puhles

Wow! I knoew there was something odd with Izzy, I have my suspicions about her. Poor Joe, he's gonna have to be careful...thier gonna have to be really sneaky in order to get him now, perhaps recruiting someone he trusts, like a certain Miss Izzy? *evil mind plots away*

haha anyways it was a really interesting chapter!

jen

I love the way you show relationships between people through your writing, it really makes me believe that they are brothers/parents/aunts/girlfriends whatever.

I can't wait to read more! It's really good so far.

jen

Sorry, the thing won't let me log in!

But this story is really interesting, I'd like to know more about Jazz and Isabella! I can't wait to read more

jen

Great job! I clicked this on a wim, i dont usually like original characters (im deathly afraid of mary-sues *shiver*), but i this so far, keep it up!

PS update A Day Off ASAP!

Hi! Nice start you've got going here. It's kind of funny how Frank and Joe can tease each other so much and yet be so close. Although, I guess, if you're brothers and dectectives like them you have to be. Well, I'm looking forward to see where this goes. Continue again soon please. Ciao! _