This is very very good so far. Please continue it soon.

Love it, love it, love it!! Your f*ng awesome at writing! The only downside is that I, personally think that all "bonds" should have been cut, so Saber could focus on taking care of the Oblivion Crisis, and THEN figure out what his past was. Just my personal opinion.

Excellent work and such dedication to detail. The dark developement due to the old bond and starting from scratch really flesh out the new Nerevar, also with how you did little skips until resyncing the timeline as they got closer. Definately an intrequing way of setting this all up.

Great story and character development, but what I'd like to see is Feryl taking a General role rather than a band of adventurers taking on hordes of Daedra. The fights themselves doesn't seem to be very descriptive, or long enough.

I hope Necros and Feryl will become friends at the end... well, when they both die fighting Mehrunes Dagon. Eiryn's child could be born right after Feryl's death, symbolising the Nerevarine lives on.

I enjoyed reading this story today, and was sad to get to the end of chapter 22 and realize that the there were no more chapters. It's been a while since you've posted an update, so I don't know if you are even considering still working on this, but if you see this review, I want you to know that I, for one, would love to see you continue this excellent story.

Please update soon! It’s such an awesome story!

Excellent story. I was wondering why Oblivion never mentions the Nerevarine except on two different occasions I have found. One, when you become a high ranking member of the Fighter's Guild and Oreyn gives you a helmet that you find in Morrowind and says a stranger gave it to him. The other is when someone said the Vardenfel crysis had ended. I enjoyed the way you have Saber and Nekros, or Eldwyn, swapping personalities. Keep up the good work!

great job, keep it up. by the way don't worry about changing some facts. As long as it sounds reasonable it'll be fine.

awsome chapter

I left a review long, long ago, back when the story started. And I really liked the beginning. Coming back more the a year later to find the story has grown in a wonderful masterpiece left me stunned. I read the whole thing, and I enjoyed it all very much. I love how you're making the story so long as well, I hope that you continue and write a new chapter soon. :D

I wish good stories like these could go on forever, hopefully the end to this story is far away. ^_^

it's great, but Saber is turning into an a hole. I really like Eldwin and i like how as the story continues we know more about each character's transformation

Very nice chapter. Eldwin certainly seems different from the Nekros I was introduced to in that first bit of Saber's story. And Saber's moved into all kinds of different. It's like I'm reading about two entirely different characters, rather than the ones I had grown to know.

Want us to keep the plot twist a secret, eh? Don't worry, I won't tell anyone that Eiryn is pregnant with Yagram Bagarn's child, your secret's safe with me. Man, Saber'll be ** when he finds out.

Hmm, that part about Nekros suddenly developing a conscience...quite interesting. That seems to hint at something that would likely be facinating, possible something caused by Saber's bond?

I wish you the best in your troubles and that they go quickly. Also, if I unfavourite you it means I can favourite you again...

I am enjoying this story, it is written very well, I love all the twists and turns and how you develop the characters.

~ADN