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| letitbeme 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseeverything about this story was great, one thing that made me laugh was that you made toby the chaplain, then he'd be father flenderson. that sounds funny to me. |
| needles 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseNow that I come to think of it, Michael is pretty similar to Henry Blake. |
| She Knows Best 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abusewonderful :). i love the summary so much too! that was one of my favorite Dwight lines. great job on the story, keep up the good work. |
| Kris S3 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseI never thought of these two shows mixing together but it works so well. Jim & Dwight are so Hawkeye & Burns and of course Creed is Klinger :) Well done. |
| xmonalisa 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was so creative! I loved it. Creed as Klinger is just perfect. I think you effectively captured the mood of both shows. The idea of sweaty/Army/surgeon Jim is just too hot...lol. Great job! |
| The General G of K 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseNot only was that the funniest description ever, but that was such a refreshing story. Honestly, after awhile, all the Jim/Pam angst deal gets so overplayed. This was such a cool idea. The Jim/Pam chemistry was some of the best I've ever read. Really low-key and cute. Plus, I got really excited because I knew what a Section 8 was from having to read a summer reading book. All in all, I'm adding this to my favorites, and I hope that if this was meant to go on, you update. Emily |
| princesslisa 2006-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I never would have imagined this scenario, but awesome job. The sad thing is that if The Office were That 70s show, they already would have done a MASH daydream sequence. Can we get another episode? |
| pixel8 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely fantastic. I admit, I approached it with trepidation because of the crossover, but you put everyone perfectly into the roles they would have been on MASH, and it works beautifully. I wouldn't mind seeing something else in a similar vein - maybe another MASH episode (although this one is perfect enough) or some other show that would work. Well done! |
| yippee 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abusei don't know MASH that well, but i thought this was adorable! |
| LunaMystik 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseWow! Usually, I avoid crossovers like the plague, but this was really, really good! You transferred the mood of The Office perfectly to Korea...great job! |
| smurfette729 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! I loved the characters (very realistic), especially Creed. Strangely enough, The Office in a warzone works. I think you might make me like MASH. |
| hokiebird90 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat idea, very original to mesh the two together. I really liked it and hope you will have more chapters! |
| spicycurry 2006-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseBest description ever! |
| bonorocks 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story! I love MASH and there's definitely similarities between the two shows. Very original idea. The JAM dance was lovely, really lovely. |