I like it. and I am a strange person. I find myself hopeing that star will be able to change back and forth. LIke she is given a way to change back to her girl self but she can willingly chose what gender she wants to be at what time. so she can have the best of both worlds. Since I realy want her to hook up with raven... but that is jsut me.

continue ^.^

The idea of this story was clever, and I liked the way you pulled off the gender change.

In your writing, you seem to be descriptive, for the most part, your characters are in character. Also, I like how you think of clever things to add such as how Tammeranian (sp) males need different emotions to work their powers.

The only few things that bothered me are as followed: *Starfire acts in the SAME EXACT manner as she did when she was female. The way you write it, it seems as though she is just disappointed in the gender change. I know if I was a girl, I would be a bit upset. So, I think you could expand on that.
Also, I don't think Starfire really ever admits up to loving Robin, so it was a bit OC for that whole thing.
Also again, I think you should steer clear of RaexSun. The whole part femslash ruins the good story you are writing.

I look forward to reading more of this.
-Derek

this is an awsome story! it's well written, and I like the plot. Keep writting

(Dark Wolf)

Yay, a new chapter! It's too bad more people aren't reviewing. Maybe they're shy. Hmm...what to say about this chapter... Poor Sunfire really needs to get out more. Heh, maybe Raven will take him on a little date? I liked the episode with the rabid fangirls popping out of nowhere. Raven seemed rather peeved with the interruption to thier outting. I wonder what the other Titans will think of Sunfire's discovery? I'm envisioning a very embarrassed Raven in the future.

Your writing is pretty good. A few minor spelling mistakes, but those are easy to miss no matter how many times you re-check your work. I noticed a couple of places that were awkward, for example... Raven grumbled as they stepped out of the swirling vortex that Raven had created for their travel... Instead of repeating 'Raven' the sentence would flow more smoothly if you just said 'she created for their travel'. Another spot that stood out was... As Raven shook with her exertions... I would have used 'As Raven shook from the exertion of lessening her rage...' or even simpler 'As Raven shook while trying to control her temper...'. I hope you don't mind me adding my two cents. ^-^u If you don't want to hear anymore constructive criticism from me just say so. Either way I look foward to future chapters of this story.

Hey, you've caught my attention with this fic. It's different. I don't recall any other fanfics where one of the Titans has been 'genderbended'. The male version of Starfire is just as endearing as the female. I actually prefer yuri pairings, but even if you paired 'Sunfire' with Raven I think I'll like it just as well. Good luck with your story. You keep writing and I'll keep reading. ^-^