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darKitty
2007-06-03 . chapter 10
Nice of you to be nice to Erida (: I'd hate to have my heart broken too. Anyway, that was a great story.

Randombaby
2006-09-06 . chapter 5
OMG pickles rule, Neil!
PrimaDina
2006-08-30 . chapter 10
o0olalao0o in the hizzle. I loved the ending, it seemed so realistic. I can completely see Atlanta wanted to wait until fighting Cronus is over. Wonderful story, I will re-read it often.
EilayAdnayVolieay
2006-08-30 . chapter 10
Hey, sorry about not reviewing for awhile, I haven't been reading any fanfiction for the most part for a few weeks now, I just saw the update and decided to check it out, so I read the past few chapters (8 and on :) ).

Anyway, I really thoroughly enjoyed this story. It didn't in the end, typically throw Archie and Atlanta together, and I like how they discussed it and said that Cronus could be an obstacle if they tried to start a relationship now. A nice change from the usual "they get together" scenario.

Erida having a happy ending was good because I felt bad for her too, even though she hurt Archie (grr... lol). (In case you didn't know, he's my favourite character :) ) So the ending was a nice touch.

I really enjoyed reading this story because you had a great way with describing the events that were happening that pulled a reader in. At least, it pulled me in, I can't say for every reader, but ya know what I mean :) So, awesome job with that. Then of course, just the fact that it was love that was their strength to being protected from Erida, a definite nice touch. How do you feel now that the stories over? Probably like you accomplished something :) Which you did, something great. Awesome story, awesome writing, so on, so forth. :)

- Jess.
999999999
2006-08-30 . chapter 10
great story. nice round off ending. story line is brilliant. can't wait until your next one!
DoubleKK
2006-08-29 . chapter 10
LOVED the ending! I'm looking forward to some new stories from, I'll look out for them! (hopfully they're have a bit more AA!)
KitKat1327
2006-08-24 . chapter 9
great story, I cant wait till the next chapter
DoubleKK
2006-08-23 . chapter 9
HOORAY FOR HERRY! Excellent chapter, they should use your ideas for the show! I'm looking forward to the final chap!
999999999
2006-08-23 . chapter 9
that was the best chapter i had ever read! ever! this chapter told me once more why i put this down as a favourite! i'm gonna read it again! keep the next chapters rolling! this one was certainly worth the wait
caity
2006-08-23 . chapter 9
Can't wait for the next chappie! Please please please please update soon!
Ishii Sen Ling
2006-08-21 . chapter 8
I like it, continue soon! It was a good idea the thing about the apple.
DoubleKK
2006-08-21 . chapter 8
I am enjoying this story very much, though I just started reading it. I love AA fluff to, and the mythology in this fic adds alot of excitment to it. Your writing skills are great and I have no critsism to give. UDDATE SOON!
By the way, regarding what happened in chapter.. um six, I think it was? Is there any mythology behind Erida's attraction to Cronus?
snowboarderchick
2006-08-21 . chapter 7
Awsome story, this is definatly my favorit chapter
Deserae Amberosi
2006-08-21 . chapter 8
WOW...

So THATS what happens when you touch that apple...

I'm glad I'm not there...

I'm ranting aren't I?

Well, anyhoo...

I can't wait for the next part.

The awesomeness drowns me...
Jessey Dess
2006-08-21 . chapter 7
Awesomeness!

YAYNESS!

This is rockin'!

Yay you!
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