that was great loved it

This was really sweet and good. I liked it very much.

*Alyssa

Ah! That was touching and cute...Fourth of July is also one of my favorite holidays!

Very nice. Cute.

OK, here's a question for you and any other Bones fan you know:

When did he start putting his hand on the small of her back?

It's been bugging me for days now and I can't stop thinking about everytime I read about it. So, if you know, please PM me the answer.

/Brennan shifted her gaze back to the fireworks display and sighed. “All I wanted after my parents disappeared was to be cared for.”

His breath was warm on her neck as he bent his head down and whispered in her ear. “You are.”/

I really liked those lines. I think it captures a lot. Good work.

I like it. Not being American, all this 4th July bit passes me by somewhat, but I get the feeling of it from your story. Thanks.

Great story!

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DJ

Love it, but wished they would have kissed!

Aww, that was great. I've been there, and it's weird because it's a pretty big place, but it seems small, even with a huge crowd. I don't know why...it's hard to explain, but I could totally picture it while reading your story. I always figured there'd be fireworks between those two! ;)

Booth is so sweet loved the "You are" moment soo lovley!

:D that was so sweet! i loved it!

-sarah

I really like how you have grasped Booths love of the holiday. I love their interaction and acceptance of feelings for each other. I hope you feel the urge to updade often. If not that is okay too. I understand that we all work and have other things that are priority. (I myself have 2 stories I need to update lol)

That was just perfect. :D

That was great! Can't wait for the series!

Ava